deluge. [shamefully broken]

[call me andrew]

i especially like the second stanza in that one alex

[happening fish]

calmly, watching me with your blue eyes
did you ever stop to realize
i was watching you right back

testing, grievous empty people
catch me in your loophole
everything that i lack

twisting, calling in the vanguard
silently i stand guard
wanting you with me

purpose, floating through the fast time
running through my fingers
hating wait and see

[lora]

[happening fish]

is it just me or does everything suck

You punched ragged holes in my heart
With a fist so tender that I hardly felt it
Having trouble feeling anything much

Had to forgive cause I didn’t really care
Except underneath where I’m bleeding
Having trouble caring about much

Laying here sprawled out on a comfortable bed
Draining my life through my fingertips
Having trouble being sure I’m alive

[happening fish]

[Axtech]

[Axtech]

[happening fish]

[happening fish]

it's been a while. this took me all of chemistry to write... as you can probably tell, i'm not a fan of that class. anyway, this one still needs touching up but i thought i'd put it in here anyway.


i held the boy with the blue eyes that held me
i kissed the boy in the green sweater vest
he's too practical to love anybody
i'm too cynical to care

i saw the face that he hides behind his glasses
i heard him say that our lives are just a game
he's too proud to lean on anybody
i'm too weak to be there

i traded sorrows with the boy who writes stories
i spilled my tears on his green sweater vest
he's too smart to need anybody
i'm too alone to play fair

[Axtech]

Very well done. I love the structure of this one (the I, I, He, I setup).

[happening fish]

[Axtech]

Yes, I think I do know.

I do, don't I?

[happening fish]

[sandsleeper]

i love it. it has a great rythm.

[happening fish]

[happening fish]

[happening fish]

[trentm32]

[happening fish]

[Axtech]