A song/poem thing...tell me what you think.

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Well, at least you never dissed anyone's work.
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Yeah, I make fun of Bethany and say I don't like certain bands. And I get banned. Yet Liam and Josh never do. Go figure. :lol:
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Well, it's expected from prepubescent boys.
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So it's alright for them to piss everyone off, but it's not alright for me to have an opinion on music. Right. Don't respond.
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Yeah, and it's not okay for me to have an opinion on someone's work? Yes, I may assume but doesn't everyone?
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you didn't give an opinion. u said she didn't write that.
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Excuse me? I don't know if you were talking to me or not, Alan, but lighten up. I was kidding. I don't enjoy Liam's or Josh's spamming of every thread, and I never said it was ok for them to. I also never said it was not ok for stinky to have an opinion. It's just how you express it.
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Exactly. It's my work and she didn't have to accuse me of something. If she wanted to, she could have simply asked "Did you actually write that? I feel like I've heard it somewhere or something." Something along those lines. She didn't have do the whole bullshit "sorry hun, this doesn't look like your work" thing. It was a total insult, and that's that. I think I'll have to make a new post so people will actually read what I've written instead of talking about stinkythestupidfuckingcat. Alrighty, new topic a-coming.
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Temper, temper.
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Post by megxyz128 »

okay, now back to the original topic at hand.

candy-coated fake: i really really like your poem/song thing. i would go into further detail about it, but i don't really know anything else about writing so i'll just stop and say that i thought it was really good.
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Thankies!
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