My added Verse:
Looked around at my reflection
Found that I had none
Blame my eyes for seeing too much
insecurities
I never thought I could just break away
Then a memory made me forget I was wrong
Sorry, but i've been listening to limp's cover of Bhind Blue Eyes and thought i'd try adding a verse to a song that i liked.
Added A Verse To 4am
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Added A Verse To 4am
THERE'S TOO MANY OF US THAT DON'T WANT TO FIGHT IT
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I like it, but for a different song. There's a rule about music, you don't fuck with a classic. It would be like Fred Durst adding a verse to Stairway to Heaven. But if you wrote your own song with that, it would rock.
I faced death. I went in with my arms swinging. But I heard my own breath and had to face that I'm still living. I'm still flesh. I hold on to awful feelings. I'm not dead... My chest still draws breath. I hold it. I'm buoyant. There's no end.
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