I know this sixteen year old girl who got pregnant by a 31 year old guy, and she is having an abortion. A good friend of mine is in love with her, and it inspired me to write this song tonight. Any feedback will be appreciated!
THIS WAY
These weren’t my intentions
It was never supposed to happen this way
I had a name for you
But not for five years more.
These weren’t my tears
It was never supposed to happen this way
I had a plan for you
But not for five years more.
Baby come and baby go
So soon the angels fly away
It was meant to be, yes
But never this way.
These weren’t my beliefs
It was never supposed to happen this way
I had a home for you
But not for five years more.
These weren’t my scars
It was never supposed to happen this way
I had a father for you
But not for five years more.
Baby come and baby go
So soon the angels fly away
It was meant to be, yes
But never this way.
I was too young to give you a life
I had no one to run to
No shoulder to cry on
I was alone with you and I made a choice
Please know that I regret never hearing your voice
Or seeing you laugh and cry when it hurts
Please know that I will always love you
I will always love you.
Baby come and baby go
So soon the angels fly away
It was meant to be, yes
But never this way.
It was meant to be, yes
But never this way.
D.F. Parker
5/20/03
Song About Abortion
Song About Abortion
<a href="http://www.wm3.org" target="_blank" title="Find out more about The West Memphis Three"><img src="http://www.wm3.org/images/WM3chainBLACKbg.gif" border="0"></a>
-
asclumsyasyouvebeen
- Posts: 14
- Joined: 5/20/2003, 9:08 pm
- Location: okanagan valley, BC, Canada
- Contact:
i think that is incredible! you definitely have talent in songwriting.
i'm sorry about the girl and the situation she's in
i'm sorry about the girl and the situation she's in
[glow=blue]i want to be someone else or i'll[/glow][glow=silver] explode[/glow]
[glow=blue]walking along the surface for the birds
the birds
the birds[/glow]
"the first thing paul martin should see in the morning when he's coming down the stairs is jack layton in a speedo coming back from the pool, and olivia chow whipping up smoothies in the kitchen" -rick mercer
[glow=blue]walking along the surface for the birds
the birds
the birds[/glow]
"the first thing paul martin should see in the morning when he's coming down the stairs is jack layton in a speedo coming back from the pool, and olivia chow whipping up smoothies in the kitchen" -rick mercer
-
happening fish
- Oskar Winner: 2006
- Posts: 17934
- Joined: 3/17/2002, 11:22 am
Thanks again, it is encouraging to receive feedback, whether it's positive or negative, from people I don't know. I actually wrote two songs yesterday, the one posted here and another called "Damn", which wasn't as good in my opinion. It didn't take me but ten minutes to write both of them. Sometimes it just flows out of me. And I don't have any music either, I just write lyrics. When I was in a band I had a guitar player to write with, and that was much easier. Sorry to rant...
<a href="http://www.wm3.org" target="_blank" title="Find out more about The West Memphis Three"><img src="http://www.wm3.org/images/WM3chainBLACKbg.gif" border="0"></a>
-
asclumsyasyouvebeen
- Posts: 14
- Joined: 5/20/2003, 9:08 pm
- Location: okanagan valley, BC, Canada
- Contact:
i'm glad you shared your song. 
i'd be so scared to lol.
i'd be so scared to lol.[glow=blue]i want to be someone else or i'll[/glow][glow=silver] explode[/glow]
[glow=blue]walking along the surface for the birds
the birds
the birds[/glow]
"the first thing paul martin should see in the morning when he's coming down the stairs is jack layton in a speedo coming back from the pool, and olivia chow whipping up smoothies in the kitchen" -rick mercer
[glow=blue]walking along the surface for the birds
the birds
the birds[/glow]
"the first thing paul martin should see in the morning when he's coming down the stairs is jack layton in a speedo coming back from the pool, and olivia chow whipping up smoothies in the kitchen" -rick mercer
NunoFreak wrote:Thanks again, it is encouraging to receive feedback,
...
-Liam
"Sometimes Nothin' Can Be a Real Cool Hand"
<a href="http://photobucket.com" target="_blank"><img src="http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a340/regular14/coolhandluke.jpg" border="0" alt="Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket"></a>
"Sometimes Nothin' Can Be a Real Cool Hand"
<a href="http://photobucket.com" target="_blank"><img src="http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a340/regular14/coolhandluke.jpg" border="0" alt="Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket"></a>
-
Axtech
- Oskar Lifetime Achievement Award: 2004
- Posts: 19796
- Joined: 3/17/2002, 5:36 pm
- Location: Kingston, Ontario, Canada
- Contact:
NunoFreak wrote:The only thing to be scared of is yourself.
What about fear itself?
- -
Every now and then I fall out into open air just to feel the wind, rain and everything.
And though the hum and sway gets me down, I'll find the way to peace and openness.
"Robbo" - © Alex (happeningfish)...^5 ^5 v v
Every now and then I fall out into open air just to feel the wind, rain and everything.
And though the hum and sway gets me down, I'll find the way to peace and openness.
"Robbo" - © Alex (happeningfish)...^5 ^5 v v
-
understandablehorror
- Posts: 177
- Joined: 2/10/2003, 9:58 pm
very good song
~ Dan ~
"If ignorance is bliss then ours is truly a blissful society."
"Meet my coalition forces, me myself and I."
"Logic is on a ski trip with it's great buddy reason."
"One lonely day a game of war will be won."
"Sometimes were too busy looking off into the distance, we can't see whats right in front of us."
"Hey is that a cloud off in the distance? No wait it's just a sheep flying."
"Have you ever wanted to be whisked off to a magical place....Delaware. Hi! I'm in Delaware!"
"If ignorance is bliss then ours is truly a blissful society."
"Meet my coalition forces, me myself and I."
"Logic is on a ski trip with it's great buddy reason."
"One lonely day a game of war will be won."
"Sometimes were too busy looking off into the distance, we can't see whats right in front of us."
"Hey is that a cloud off in the distance? No wait it's just a sheep flying."
"Have you ever wanted to be whisked off to a magical place....Delaware. Hi! I'm in Delaware!"