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love is
Posted: 2/22/2003, 3:55 pm
by Endymion
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Posted: 2/22/2003, 4:01 pm
by committed
awesome
specifically lines 6 and 7 and the entire fourth stanza
Posted: 2/22/2003, 4:08 pm
by Endymion
heh, it's all so pointless until you find someone.
and then when you lose someone..
it's back to feeling a total lack of direction.
like there'll never be anyone as perfect.
Posted: 2/22/2003, 4:11 pm
by committed
yeah it's true
there's definite disappointment
Posted: 2/22/2003, 5:40 pm
by liam
lots.. of... strangness... maybe itll make sence when i get someone... or lose someone..
Posted: 2/22/2003, 8:31 pm
by Sufjan Stevens
Endymion wrote:heh, it's all so pointless until you find someone.
and then when you lose someone..
it's back to feeling a total lack of direction.
like there'll never be anyone as perfect.
I've never heard anything more true than that. But then again, when you get some one new, it's funny how the prior girl means absolutely nothing to you. If I wasn't so damn young, I'd love to just give up dating and settle down with some one (not marraige) and just be with her for a long while. But yeah, that won't happen until I am out of college....
Re: love is
Posted: 2/22/2003, 10:07 pm
by Bananababy
Endymion wrote:
because she's never felt
so beautiful or alive
someone who'd hurt me
because I'm worth losing
someone who'd want me
because I'm worth missing
those are my favorite lines.... i like it.
Posted: 2/23/2003, 4:45 pm
by starvingeyes
i give it an overall rating of 3 cheeseburgers and 6 orgasms. nice work.
Posted: 2/23/2003, 7:18 pm
by happening fish
i've got to agree with that rating.
Posted: 2/23/2003, 9:14 pm
by luckyJQ9
that's an awesome poem. it struck me the entirely the right way, and that's hard to come by.
Posted: 2/27/2003, 11:21 pm
by 2+2=5
wow. that's great.