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<font color="#CCFFCC">spent and sighing with a look in your eye
spent and sighing with a look on your face like

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awesome

specifically lines 6 and 7 and the entire fourth stanza
we are the brand new beatniks. we are the down and outers.
we are the bleeding hearts, beating syncopated, broken rhythm.
our speed is often break neck. we need to slow it down.
tired of being sleepless. tired of being broken.

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heh, it's all so pointless until you find someone.

and then when you lose someone..

it's back to feeling a total lack of direction.

like there'll never be anyone as perfect.
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yeah it's true

there's definite disappointment
we are the brand new beatniks. we are the down and outers.
we are the bleeding hearts, beating syncopated, broken rhythm.
our speed is often break neck. we need to slow it down.
tired of being sleepless. tired of being broken.

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lots.. of... strangness... maybe itll make sence when i get someone... or lose someone..
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Endymion wrote:heh, it's all so pointless until you find someone.

and then when you lose someone..

it's back to feeling a total lack of direction.

like there'll never be anyone as perfect.


I've never heard anything more true than that. But then again, when you get some one new, it's funny how the prior girl means absolutely nothing to you. If I wasn't so damn young, I'd love to just give up dating and settle down with some one (not marraige) and just be with her for a long while. But yeah, that won't happen until I am out of college....
I faced death. I went in with my arms swinging. But I heard my own breath and had to face that I'm still living. I'm still flesh. I hold on to awful feelings. I'm not dead... My chest still draws breath. I hold it. I'm buoyant. There's no end.
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Endymion wrote:
because she's never felt
so beautiful or alive

someone who'd hurt me
because I'm worth losing
someone who'd want me
because I'm worth missing

those are my favorite lines.... i like it.
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i give it an overall rating of 3 cheeseburgers and 6 orgasms. nice work.
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i've got to agree with that rating.
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that's an awesome poem. it struck me the entirely the right way, and that's hard to come by.
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wow. that's great.
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I was then to be part of the mystery,
to love and be loved. Let's just hope that is enough.
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