i love you

committed · Post by **committed** » 2/12/2003, 5:08 pm

as soon as the words left my mouth
your eyes widened and you looked at me
then your head slinked away
as you timidly forced a smile
i knew you thought i was joking
just like i knew before i said it
that you wouldn't requite it
i didn't matter much to me
i'd say it to someone else in a month

mosaik · Post by **mosaik** » 2/12/2003, 5:12 pm

niiiiice

emily · Post by **emily** » 2/12/2003, 5:46 pm

committed · Post by **committed** » 2/12/2003, 6:22 pm

:iamaloser:

ArlieKoz13 · Post by **ArlieKoz13** » 2/12/2003, 6:35 pm

I like it.

committed · Post by **committed** » 2/12/2003, 6:38 pm

thank you

ArlieKoz13 · Post by **ArlieKoz13** » 2/12/2003, 6:39 pm

Welcome.

Mechanical Thought · Post by **Mechanical Thought** » 2/12/2003, 8:06 pm

very very good

emily · Post by **emily** » 2/12/2003, 10:21 pm

the faces were because it was sad but because i liked it.

committed · Post by **committed** » 2/12/2003, 10:26 pm

yeah i'm writing this weird stuff lately for no reason

thanks again everyone

2+2=5 · Post by **2+2=5** » 2/13/2003, 10:38 pm

it's not weird.

committed · Post by **committed** » 2/13/2003, 11:24 pm

yeah it is

it's about just fucking around or something. saying i love you to two different people in one month? no way.

and the other ones.

they're messed up.

2+2=5 · Post by **2+2=5** » 2/13/2003, 11:31 pm

well you have I'm sure.

committed · Post by **committed** » 2/13/2003, 11:35 pm

2+2=5 · Post by **2+2=5** » 2/13/2003, 11:46 pm

Said I love you. To two people in one month. I can't tell if you were arguing if that is strange or not, or if you've done it. Actually, I'm not sure that you were arguing anything at all.

committed · Post by **committed** » 2/13/2003, 11:47 pm

i've never done it.

2+2=5 · Post by **2+2=5** » 2/14/2003, 12:00 am

alrighty then.

committed · Post by **committed** » 2/14/2003, 12:03 am

Endymion · Post by **Endymion** » 2/20/2003, 2:48 pm

heh, you've got talent, Jeff, no doubt.

start a band, I'd listen just for your lyrics.

I'm not bullshitting when I say we could all be talking to the next Matt Skiba.

it's sort of rare for me to give a compliment that big, so take it for what it's worth.

personally, I think your style is unpretentious but brilliant, which is a huge asset to have. It's appreciated widely, without the fake pseudo-intellectual scenesters who think convoluted and intricate poetry is the only way to go.

I think there's room for all styles of poetry, and everything, but I get really sick of people who call themselves poets because they use a lot of thee's, thou's, and forsaken's in their writing.

props to you.

committed · Post by **committed** » 2/20/2003, 2:56 pm

dude.

wow.

i really really appreciate that.