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another new untitled poem

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you were beautiful,
a beauty you weren't
ready to possess.
you captured my heart
and everything i had
to go with it. the way
things came to be was
like something out of
a fairy tale. who can
forget the stars over
our heads when you
said that boys like me
are hard to find? i don't
regret that you found me
or that you loved me.
i wouldn't give that up
for anything. but i know
i'd give anything to have
it back. as long as you're
happy, that's all that
matters to me. that's
how it's been since the
very beginning. smiles
make the world go round.
i hope they make us go
round too and that our
fairy tale comes full circle
and we live happily
ever after.
we are the brand new beatniks. we are the down and outers.
we are the bleeding hearts, beating syncopated, broken rhythm.
our speed is often break neck. we need to slow it down.
tired of being sleepless. tired of being broken.

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:love:
!EMiLY!

sweet blasphemy my giving tree
it hasn't rained in years
i bring to you this sacrificial offering of virgin ears
leave it to me i remain free from all the comforts of home
and where that is i'm pleased as piss to say
i'll never really know
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:love: :drool: pretty poem...

Without you I'm as good as
dead ...
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Liam said he likes it more than Eggnog... and he loves eggnog...
-Liam

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thanks girls and boy
we are the brand new beatniks. we are the down and outers.
we are the bleeding hearts, beating syncopated, broken rhythm.
our speed is often break neck. we need to slow it down.
tired of being sleepless. tired of being broken.

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Post by happening fish »

you mean "thanks girls and liam"

and that's a very pretty poem jeff :D
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