One Man Army ReWrite

[Kicker774]

Slow day for once at work, started this little rewrite for OMA.

Lemme know what you think so far:

Take this gearshift lever
Pull it back, and hit the gas now
Is there anything that feels as good?
C'mon quickly grab the wheel
Use your strength, now hit the apex
Don't worry if the backside slides on out!
Overcooked, rubber not gripping!

I remember sliding
I remember drifting
In my Red Integra
Through the curve
I know I'm skidding
I need to do some braking
Then I grab 3rd and hit the throttle
And hit the straightaway


That's my WIP so far.
Might come back to it later if I'm inspired enough.

[Neil]

Intriguing.

However, when I try to sing along I feel like there is missing linker verbs in there, or something.

Keep working on it; one of my best friends is a racer and would probably love it.