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Corey
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my first attempt at writing a song.... so cut me some slack

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sometimes


sometimes.. I watch the sky
and sometimes I stay up all night
but sometimes I just can't take the pain

sometimes.. I remember you
and sometimes I forget we're through
but sometimes I want to see you again

it was not so long ago
you loved me but you didn't know
you just left me here to wait
but now it's all far too late
found another to take my heart
you should've known from the start
that things wouldn't work out this wayyyyyyyyy.

sometimes.. I think I loved you
and sometimes I try to start a new
but sometimes I make a big mistake

sometimes.. I just can't forget
and sometimes I do things I regret
but THIS time you'll have your heart break

I don't need you anymore
grab your things and walk out that door
I'm so happy I'm without you
but you didn't have a clue
I don't need you in my life
I found another to be my wife
I guess there's nothing left to sayyyyyyyyyy.

sometimes.....ohh sometimes
sometimes.....yeah sometimes
sometimes.....some some some sometimmeeees

so sometimes.. I hope you remember this
that without you.. my life is pure bliss
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Post by nelison »

that was very good
straight, to the point, very well written
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you got a gift... he he he i called you kid.
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