Tonight, which version?

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Tonight, which version?

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1 or 2
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No offence, because I know you can write really good poerty, but I don't like either version.
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Well you sipped from the cup but you don't own up to anything
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Take apart your head
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Take apart your demons, then you add it to the list.
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2
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Okay, so 3's out.
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i was gonna say 2 earlier, but was too lazy
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I prefer 2.

Queens Of The Stone Age-Someone's In The Wolf
Once you're lost in twillights's blue
You don't find your way, the way finds you...

Tempt the fates, beware the smile
It hides all the teeth, my dear,
What's behind them...

So glad you could stay
Forever

He steps between the trees, a crooked man
There's blood on the blade
Don't take his hand

You warm by the firelight, in twilight's blue
Shadows creep & dance the walls
He's creeping too..

So glad you could stay
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2 seems the best.
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2


Shouldn't this have a poll? :lol:
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No! Because that would make sense, and who wants that?
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Not I.

Queens Of The Stone Age-Someone's In The Wolf
Once you're lost in twillights's blue
You don't find your way, the way finds you...

Tempt the fates, beware the smile
It hides all the teeth, my dear,
What's behind them...

So glad you could stay
Forever

He steps between the trees, a crooked man
There's blood on the blade
Don't take his hand

You warm by the firelight, in twilight's blue
Shadows creep & dance the walls
He's creeping too..

So glad you could stay
Forever

Image <----------------- click and listen!
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(he means "Not 1")
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