Here is a song that I wrote.

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Here is a song that I wrote.

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Recovery

Please let me know what you think of it. It's piano + a lyric track, which I'd sing if I didn't sound like a dying donkey everytime I try to sing.

Lyrics:

I tore my skin off yesterday
I feel better now
All my futures thrown away
I should have known all truths decay
I have become the game I play
I feel better now

I’ve painted skin on over bones
I feel better now
Those lies were all I’d ever known
And I am stitched of scars I’ve grown
At least my madness is my own
I feel better now

My corpse is smiling with fleshless mirth
I feel better now
Black progeny of this rebirth
I’m dead and buried in the earth
It’s all more trouble than it’s worth
I feel better now
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Post by reza »

*scared*

'tis good :D
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Scared?
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Post by Rusty »

I like it. I like it a lot.

Queens Of The Stone Age-Someone's In The Wolf

Once you're lost in twillights's blue
You don't find your way, the way finds you...

Tempt the fates, beware the smile
It hides all the teeth, my dear,
What's behind them...

So glad you could stay
Forever

He steps between the trees, a crooked man
There's blood on the blade
Don't take his hand

You warm by the firelight, in twilight's blue
Shadows creep & dance the walls
He's creeping too..

So glad you could stay
Forever


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Post by laurel »

i loooove the piano.

when would the lyrics kick in with the piano, though? i'm just trying to get an idea of it with lyrics and piano going.
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Post by One-Eye »

Lyrics are the voxsynth track. The intro is 4 bars with left hand, then 8 bars with both hands, then the lyrics kick in.
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Post by Joe Cooler »

Wow, i'm quite impressed. You should really try and sing it out though.
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Post by nikki4982 »

Why did I not know of this talent of yours til now?!? :freak:

VERY nice job. :clap:
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Post by One-Eye »

:mrgreen: Thanks, guys.
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