school letter

Axtech · Post by **Axtech** » 9/12/2004, 7:44 pm

Nope, that doesn't work. You can't start the second sentance with "to".

If you're going to break up the sentence, go:

I have been greatly concerned about changing my major all summer, to such an extent that I have lost sleep over the issue. I would be relieved if this could be sorted out.

Rusty · Post by **Rusty** » 9/12/2004, 7:46 pm

Try: I have been greatly concerned about changing my major all summer, to such an extent that I have lost sleep over the issue. I would be greatly relieved if you could help with this. Thank you in advance.

Your signature.

You should have a thank you in there to show that you appreciate them taking the time to do this for you.

Penguin Josh · Post by **Penguin Josh** » 9/12/2004, 7:47 pm

^ that is what it is now, word yelled at me when to was the start of a sentence

happening fish · Post by **happening fish** » 9/14/2004, 9:29 am

This has got to be the funniest thread EVER.

Penguin Josh · Post by **Penguin Josh** » 9/14/2004, 2:32 pm

Random Name · Post by **Random Name** » 9/14/2004, 5:13 pm

Johnny · Post by **Johnny** » 9/14/2004, 7:13 pm

nikki4982 · Post by **nikki4982** » 9/15/2004, 11:50 pm

Rusty wrote:That's awkward. How about something like. I have been greatly concerned about changing my major all summer. To such an extent that I have lost sleep over the issue. I would be relieved if this could be sorted out. Thank you.

Uhh. Rusty. Never try to help anyone with grammar ever again. EVER. :neutral:

Axtech · Post by **Axtech** » 9/16/2004, 6:19 pm

Rusty · Post by **Rusty** » 9/16/2004, 6:21 pm

nikki4982 wrote:
Rusty wrote:That's awkward. How about something like. I have been greatly concerned about changing my major all summer. To such an extent that I have lost sleep over the issue. I would be relieved if this could be sorted out. Thank you.

Uhh. Rusty. Never try to help anyone with grammar ever again. EVER.

nikki4982 · Post by **nikki4982** » 9/17/2004, 4:21 am

Well, come on, man... "To such an extent that I have lost sleep over the issue."... that's quite obviously a sentence fragment. And that's just the beginning of it's problems. :lol: