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stars in the street

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The pointy golden stars
Decay beneath my feet
And I cannot realize
That which makes them obsolete.
My failing, fervid eyes
Are searching the concrete,
And I discover that my stars
Are mere leaves strewn in the street.
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Very pretty Kimmy. I love it.
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thanks. :)
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I sense a trend with Kimmy and stars. :)
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Kimmy :drool: that's fucking awesome.

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lol thanks, caitlin.

hmm... i never thought of myself of having any special affinity for stars, but i guess it's possible, like unconscious or something.
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It reminded me of a short poem I wrote about a sidewalk once... lol.
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lol, that's actually about a sidewalk too, except i didn't feel like working "sidewalk" or "bike path" into the rhyme scheme :lol:
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i know it is :nod:
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sandsleeper wrote:hmm... i never thought of myself of having any special affinity for stars, but i guess it's possible, like unconscious or something.


hehe :) I was judging by the "you left some stars in my belly" that was in your AIM profile for a while.
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ohh! lol yeah, that's from a jeff buckley song. i was just too lazy to quote him in the profile. :P
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