Layour for my upcoming website

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A pop-up book of flowers from grade 4 are driving her insane...
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la_bella_mafia
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Layour for my upcoming website

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http://www.webpost.net/di/digitalbeauty/olp.png

Jeremy isn't on there because I couldn't find any good or clear pictures of him playing.

any opinions?
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That looks cool.

My only beef is that you should leave out the errors in Raine's quotes (ex: "We - uh - we"). Even though that stuff is there, it will sound more professional if you write what he means to say.
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I thought it was pretty snazzy 8-)
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i like it, the shading around the pictures could have been better (that is, if you're looking for constructive cristicism), but i do enjoy it.
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