Possessive Eyes

areusad831 · Post by **areusad831** » 7/13/2003, 10:43 pm

first thing i ever posted here...it is shitty so rip it apart.

so you fucking think you are proving me wrong
think you are making me ache and pine
not this time, not again
you had your time and it is gone
your eyes no longer meet mine
i avoid them on purpose
you are scared...alone and i can tell
you look back quickly and walk on
you better fucking realize im gone
this is the end.
and in your agony, i hope you cry
and many times i wish you would die
i realized i lived in a lie
and i have met new eyes
more caring and loving then you could ever provide
so take your superficial life and your smirking puppet
and keep living in fear
and keep wishing i was there but i will wish no such thing
because i am glad you are gone
and that i have moved on
so long
fuck off
and never think of me again
i dont want to be in your head
i would rather be dead.
but now i am glad to be alive
alive for the first time in a long time
free from your possessive eyes.
this is the end, my final goodbye.

Joey · Post by **Joey** » 7/13/2003, 11:08 pm

Only because I like you (and you're really secretly forcing me too) will I post here.

It's really good. I like it. You should write more often, I'd like to read more stuff from you. Lots of emotion in that .. nice work :nod:

areusad831 · Post by **areusad831** » 7/13/2003, 11:09 pm

thanks joey :love:

committed · Post by **committed** » 7/14/2003, 2:09 am

beautiful, rob. beautiful.

superboots · Post by **superboots** » 7/14/2003, 6:54 am

see, i told you it was good, rob :nod:

Axtech · Post by **Axtech** » 7/14/2003, 7:12 am

I love it, man. :nod:

sandsleeper · Post by **sandsleeper** » 7/14/2003, 8:36 am

robcore · Post by **robcore** » 7/14/2003, 9:18 am

Reminds me of my bitch ex girlfriend, i approve. :nod:

areusad831 · Post by **areusad831** » 7/14/2003, 10:30 am

see what a visit from a ex-gf can bring a year later...great poetry. thanks for the replies :mrgreen:

committed · Post by **committed** » 7/14/2003, 12:17 pm

i have been writing about my ex a lot lately. and i don't know why. i haven't talked to her in seven months.

robcore · Post by **robcore** » 7/14/2003, 3:36 pm

They haunt us.