Everything I found in you (C&C Welcome)

[LightRainShower]

Pain is on the edge of my lips,
lips which tremble so I don't forget you.
I've got to let it go,
I've got to kneel over, and
try to spit out everything
I found in you.
Everything I found in you.

You,
you don't have your own thoughts.
You could never come up with something of your own.
You,
you never asked of me,
anything that would bring me closer.
And now, all these doubts I find in you,
brings me to my knees.

Shame is the color of your eyes,
that never look at me, so I can't remember.
I've got to let this go,
I've got to kneel down, and
try to bury everything,
I found in you.
Everything I found in you.



Comments and Critiques?

[neoncrossing]

I like this one a lot.....very good!!!!!

[LightRainShower]

Thanks neoncrossing