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A pop-up book of flowers from grade 4 are driving her insane...
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Joey
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Post by Joey »

I'm not one to post anything I write. ever. but meh. feel free to voice your opinions.

Breathe in
One last breath
So tired
Of feeling nothing
Hold on
To the empty bottle
Give in
Let the blade be your guide
Let go
It's what you want
Don't be afraid
The darkness will swallow you
Breathe out
One last breath
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Post by Dr. Hobo »

i like it a lot joey, i think its well written and beautiful :thumbs:
way to go hon
go fuck yourself.
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Post by One-Eye »

Very, very good. :thumbs:

But now I'm depressed. :(
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Post by happening fish »

Ah that captures depression sooo well :(
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