"Remember me, but Ah! Forget my fate."

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"Remember me, but Ah! Forget my fate."

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As we stumble forth into the inevitable
Tears streak not our faces.
Bravely,
Boldly,
We claw each other senseless.

Too deaf to hear our own shrill cries
echo through the valley;
too daft to even recognize
this common, hopeless plea:

"May our final exhalation
ring no louder than precedent!
May the end of this fine line
be marked no bolder than it's length!"

We all must make some room
in our collective hearts,
take ourselves in wholly
while we are swallowed by the dark.
Lick a finger: feel the now.
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Post by areusad831 »

:thumbs:

jeff buckley :drool:

when i grow up im gonna be like kimmy
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well, son, if you dedicate yourself to living on the computer chair and eating bags of chocolate chips you can accomplish anything.
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*is transfixed at Kimmy's majesty*

I am not worthy!
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Post by sandsleeper »

thanks aerin! coming from one of the cm's poetry gurus that truly is a big compliment. :mrgreen:
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Post by happening fish »

Truly beautiful :nod:
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merci.

oh wait... that's "over" :lol:
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Post by sandsleeper »

short. and not all that good. just felt like postin it.

shut your ears

now that i'm here i have nothing to say.

i've nothing to say but wish someone would listen.

the problem is me,
the problem is now.



don't reach out your hand for i'll strike it










down.
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Post by happening fish »

Rife with emotion. I see you been taking form lessons from e.e. cummings... very nice indeed :nod:
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Post by sandsleeper »

:mrgreen: just a wee bit. it's not screwed up enough though. :lol:
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