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A pop-up book of flowers from grade 4 are driving her insane...
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i'm not cut out for this
i've known it all along
now it's time to accept it
it's gotten to the point
where there's nothing i can do
and nothing i want to say
to you or to anyone
or even to myself
except i'm sorry
there's no hope for me
we are the brand new beatniks. we are the down and outers.
we are the bleeding hearts, beating syncopated, broken rhythm.
our speed is often break neck. we need to slow it down.
tired of being sleepless. tired of being broken.

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That was rather amazing. I like it or identify with it a lot more than others you've written. Not that the others are bad or anything :)
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powerful...
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