about my grandfather

call me andrew · Post by **call me andrew** » 12/15/2002, 9:01 am

I left you
expecting you’d be there
on my return

A call. It broke
the silence of the night
what’s wrong?

Its your grandfather
all I can think of is
how much I’ll miss you

We connected together so well
you were like my best friend
memories bring tears to my eyes

So I closed them
when I do, I can dream
dream of the times we used to have

With my eyes shut,
my imagination paints a picture in my head
but inside I know you’re dead.

xoNoDoubt69 · Post by **xoNoDoubt69** » 12/15/2002, 9:24 am

thats really pretty. That reminds me of my grandfather who passed away a few years ago. I was really close to him too.

Sufjan Stevens · Post by **Sufjan Stevens** » 12/15/2002, 1:32 pm

That was really good...

call me andrew · Post by **call me andrew** » 12/15/2002, 2:09 pm

thanks... its really the first poem i've ever written

emily · Post by **emily** » 12/15/2002, 2:40 pm

beginners luck

just kidding, i thought it was really good

kristen · Post by **kristen** » 12/15/2002, 4:06 pm

O_L_P JUNKY wrote:thanks... its really the first poem i've ever written

That's a really pretty poem! You should definately keep writing! :nod: