this is a couple months old, it's called i guess i can wait

committed · Post by **committed** » 12/10/2002, 1:06 am

i look intently at her face.
she blushes and brushes
the hair out of her eyes.
the sun shines off

her golden hair,
causing her face to glow.
she tells me to stop
staring and shyly

turns to gaze out
the window. i see
her reflection as she
closes her eyes

and exhales. i can
see her smiling but
i know she won't
admit it. she peeks

over her shoulder
but denies that she
cares if i leave the room
or not. i get up to leave

and she quickly grabs
my hand. she pulls me
close, kisses me, and we
stare out together.

call me andrew · Post by **call me andrew** » 12/10/2002, 6:34 am

that's beautiful

happening fish · Post by **happening fish** » 12/10/2002, 3:28 pm

why do you always chop lines off like that? just curious. it's nice.

committed · Post by **committed** » 12/10/2002, 3:55 pm

you need to break lines somewhere. well, i do. personal preference/style.

veryoldshoelace · Post by **veryoldshoelace** » 12/11/2002, 10:36 am

that makes me think of this creepy kid who stares at me in Spanish class....scaryness

but its good