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committed · Post by **committed** » 12/2/2002, 1:21 pm

i want to see your skin
and become a part of it,
be swept away in a sea of
pale, serene curves- your
lips, your hips, and your
dips; skin as sweet as
honey and as soft as
clouds. you're my angel
and your body is
my heaven. essence
that makes life worth living.

starvingeyes · Post by **starvingeyes** » 12/2/2002, 5:07 pm

jeff is, sure as shit, a star that rocks.

my eternal admiration goes out to you. autograph my man boobs.

One-Eye · Post by **One-Eye** » 12/2/2002, 6:34 pm

It's good stuff. :nod:

On a related note, do you ever write, think, or post anything that has nothing at all to do with sex?

sandsleeper · Post by **sandsleeper** » 12/2/2002, 6:39 pm

^ haha i was wondering that myself.

might i add, however, that it is very good :nod:

superrgirll · Post by **superrgirll** » 12/2/2002, 6:41 pm

I wish i could find a nice boy who would write me poems, but all i seem to find are the asshole, using, loser boys

committed · Post by **committed** » 12/2/2002, 6:45 pm

Aerindipity wrote:It's good stuff. On a related note, do you ever write, think, or post anything that has nothing at all to do with sex?

*puzzled*

this is the first poem i've written about sex. and it's not really even about sex.

superrgirll wrote:I wish i could find a nice boy who would write me poems, but all i seem to find are the asshole, using, loser boys

*waves*

superrgirll · Post by **superrgirll** » 12/2/2002, 6:47 pm

*waves back*

Yes Jeff, you are a nice boy, but i need to find a nice boy who lives relatively close to me. (i can't find any though

)

committed · Post by **committed** » 12/2/2002, 6:56 pm

superrgirll wrote:*waves back*

Yes Jeff, you are a nice boy, but i need to find a nice boy who lives relatively close to me. (i can't find any though )

oh

*takes a few steps north*

now am i close enough?

superrgirll · Post by **superrgirll** » 12/2/2002, 6:58 pm

You're getting there

committed · Post by **committed** » 12/2/2002, 6:58 pm

all right!

emily · Post by **emily** » 12/2/2002, 8:03 pm

i didnt think it was about sex, just very lovely. :nod:

it reminds me of another piece of poetry but i can't remember what.