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is this catchy?

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i know that you're not the one
i won't miss you when you're gone
because you're not the one
i admit that it's been fun
but when all is said and done
i know that you're not the one
i know that you're not the one
i know that you're not the one for me
we are the brand new beatniks. we are the down and outers.
we are the bleeding hearts, beating syncopated, broken rhythm.
our speed is often break neck. we need to slow it down.
tired of being sleepless. tired of being broken.

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Extremely. I could see some one like a Weezer singing that.
I faced death. I went in with my arms swinging. But I heard my own breath and had to face that I'm still living. I'm still flesh. I hold on to awful feelings. I'm not dead... My chest still draws breath. I hold it. I'm buoyant. There's no end.
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I agree with Alan. Weezer, after I think about it. When I first saw it, Barenaked Ladies came to mind. :freak:
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sadly... very sadly i saw Blink 182... it seems everyone finds their tunes catchy but me.
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i have this chorus recorded on my computer if you want to hear it in musical context
we are the brand new beatniks. we are the down and outers.
we are the bleeding hearts, beating syncopated, broken rhythm.
our speed is often break neck. we need to slow it down.
tired of being sleepless. tired of being broken.

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I wanna hear
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Blink songs ARE CATCHY!!!!!! :evil:
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Dan Andriano's "Lucky Smoke Rings" is much catchier. I would tell you all to download it, but it's not on Kazaa or anything, so ask me for the song and I will send it. It's rather catchy and very very good.
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i dont know what it would sound like as a song but read, the rhyme scheme gets a little monotonous
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i said i have it recorded
we are the brand new beatniks. we are the down and outers.
we are the bleeding hearts, beating syncopated, broken rhythm.
our speed is often break neck. we need to slow it down.
tired of being sleepless. tired of being broken.

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monotonous=catchy
!EMiLY!

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i bring to you this sacrificial offering of virgin ears
leave it to me i remain free from all the comforts of home
and where that is i'm pleased as piss to say
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whenyoukissedme wrote:i have this chorus recorded on my computer if you want to hear it in musical context


i wanna hear too
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Me too.
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