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starvingeyes · Post by **starvingeyes** » 11/12/2002, 12:40 pm

what do you need?
because lover, i swear
you've got it all
there's a world inside of you
of soft curves and
warm skin
a rich sky made of
your sweet smell
a paradise
without a judging god

Endymion · Post by **Endymion** » 11/12/2002, 2:21 pm

perfect.

committed · Post by **committed** » 11/12/2002, 2:22 pm

i am speechless

Susan · Post by **Susan** » 11/12/2002, 2:33 pm

Very impressive.

lora · Post by **lora** » 11/12/2002, 3:13 pm

fabulous. simply fabulous.

curtman16 · Post by **curtman16** » 11/12/2002, 9:34 pm

Worthy of a Response, which is talented! You just writing poetry or are you going together some lines and music to it?

sandsleeper · Post by **sandsleeper** » 11/13/2002, 7:18 pm

i really like your reference to "a paradise without a judging god." i've been giving a lot of thought to this topic lately, about how we're always being judged by everyone, even by a so called god in the end. paradise would be a state of complete nonjudgmentalism. then all we'd have to fear is ourselves. good line. :thumbs:

ALongGetaway · Post by **ALongGetaway** » 11/13/2002, 8:20 pm

wow. thats beautiful. it really is.
and ^i totally agree with you. ive actually thought about that too.