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sorry I haven't posted in a while, but, here we go.....

Joe America

I need a fix
To catch my eye
Only for a second
A second that makes
me happy
Only for a second
I need to feel real good
Or maybe not feel a thing
Only
For
A second
I snap my fingers
And stomp the floor
And throw things and ...

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!!
(write that down!)

[quote="half jill"]so, i took a lot of pictures today.

I love the ones with the hands in the air, very pretty

Scrawled out during Psych class:

Sometimes something inside me
Makes me want to run without shoes
Something just makes me want to
Shade my eyes from the sun
For just a little while

To taste the approaching rain
As heavy grey clouds
like an anvil
Settle, somehow delicately
Over my head

I need ...

i just finished reading Age of Spiritual Machines by Ray Kurzweil creepy but at the same time exeptionally cool. I'm trying to dive into poetry headfirst now and am now reading Leaves of Grass by Whitman. It's really starting to convince me that my body is a super-sexy hunk of lovin'.

I found this lying around:

It all rushes past me
so fast
I can't stop it
I can't
feel it
I won't love it

Why must he suffer
And why must she weep for this

But Beauty dances with Fate
And we watch
As the two circle around
And around
And around
Until the dawn breaks

Can I hate what is ...

I dig man, i like the sporadic rhyming

thanks guys, i'll work on it

Hey guys, I'm trying out my poetic wings, so critique me, but gently...

Her Eyes

And her eyes are an ocean
One so vast, so open
The edges stretch beyond the sky

And I sit on the bank
My toes sink into the sand so low
Watch the sun burst from the sea

Oh the colors you should see
That fly ...

By the way, Hey Roomie.....BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH

Hey fellas, I'm a Monkey Virgin, so be gentle. Pertaining to the "Rhyming poem vs. Not-So-Rhyming poem" I must say that I have much respect for rhyming poetry. If someone is really good with rhyming poetry, then powerful emotions can be triggered in the reader by a simple "flick of the wrist", that ...