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stars in the street
Posted: 11/6/2003, 9:16 pm
by sandsleeper
The pointy golden stars
Decay beneath my feet
And I cannot realize
That which makes them obsolete.
My failing, fervid eyes
Are searching the concrete,
And I discover that my stars
Are mere leaves strewn in the street.
Posted: 11/7/2003, 10:21 am
by happening fish
Very pretty Kimmy. I love it.
Posted: 11/7/2003, 10:37 am
by sandsleeper
thanks.

Posted: 11/7/2003, 5:47 pm
by buzhwa
I sense a trend with Kimmy and stars.

Posted: 11/7/2003, 6:08 pm
by Mechanical Thought
Kimmy

that's fucking awesome.
Posted: 11/7/2003, 7:23 pm
by sandsleeper
lol thanks, caitlin.
hmm... i never thought of myself of having any special affinity for stars, but i guess it's possible, like unconscious or something.
Posted: 11/9/2003, 4:14 pm
by happening fish
It reminded me of a short poem I wrote about a sidewalk once... lol.
Posted: 11/9/2003, 4:20 pm
by sandsleeper
lol, that's actually about a sidewalk too, except i didn't feel like working "sidewalk" or "bike path" into the rhyme scheme

Posted: 11/9/2003, 5:48 pm
by happening fish
i know it is

Posted: 11/9/2003, 10:40 pm
by buzhwa
sandsleeper wrote:hmm... i never thought of myself of having any special affinity for stars, but i guess it's possible, like unconscious or something.
hehe

I was judging by the "you left some stars in my belly" that was in your AIM profile for a while.
Posted: 11/10/2003, 3:00 pm
by sandsleeper
ohh! lol yeah, that's from a jeff buckley song. i was just too lazy to quote him in the profile.
