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Stream of Conciousness

Posted: 9/23/2003, 2:38 pm
by trentm32
Does anyone else just, when you have a spare moment, take a pen and scibble down a poem; just whatever comes to your mind. I did that about five minutes ago (I'm at work) and this is what came out...

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One more day to be normal

Because I came to be too late,
I had one more day to be normal.
I was still unable to change your fate,
But I still had one more day to be normal.

You left without a sad goodbye,
You left with no goodbye at all,
On the wings of doves to fly to heights
I can’t reach for the coming Fall.

My life will change, of that I’m sure,
For which way, I have no clue,
But to live without you,
it will never do, my God, it will never do.

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does anyone else do this with their spare seconds? i dunno, just being a work filing papers dulls my brain; so whenever I can I try to scribble something halfway intelligible/creative down to make me feel less like a cog in the corporate machine.

Posted: 9/23/2003, 4:30 pm
by liam
great job, and yes many of us do, i write in school all the time. And when i don't feel like donig homework... again great stuff!

Posted: 9/24/2003, 4:09 pm
by Automatic_Flowers
when i have a spare moment, i just get really happy, because i never have a spare moment.. so i do nothing.. i enjoy the nothing-ness

Posted: 9/24/2003, 5:02 pm
by liam
i almost had a whitty remark to that... but i'm too damn tired!

Posted: 9/24/2003, 7:34 pm
by happening fish
I do that a lot, Trent, and as you've just proved it can have some amazing results :nod:

Posted: 9/24/2003, 8:35 pm
by Random Name
The best poetry is when you arnt trying, just writing. I find that I'll write things I didnt know I had in me. Its like opening up the flood gates to your sub-conscious for 30 seconds.

Posted: 9/25/2003, 1:10 pm
by sandsleeper
this is where my last stream of consciousness experience got me:

http://sandsleeper.diaryland.com

Posted: 9/25/2003, 1:24 pm
by liam
well... i have a whole website for my stream of consciousness www.nogsite.2ya.com

Posted: 9/25/2003, 7:47 pm
by happening fish
man Liam, you need a better layout! why is there a banner :wtf: