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All Of My Poems...

Posted: 9/6/2003, 3:11 pm
by Baby Thief
http://forums.linkinpark.com/showthread ... did=204471

Go to that link for every poem i have ever written, and a couple of songs. I have comments about all of them.

Personally, i would have to say my best are:

The Alarm
The Chapter Of Life That No One Wants To Tell
Center Of A Car Crash (has nothing to do with OLP song)
(Middle Of Nothing)
Shopping For Time Through Empty Aisles

Some that a bunch of people really seemed to like... not including the ones i mentioned above:

Got Happy For Nothing
Relgion Killed Logic
Stickfigure Parade

Just look around that thread to find those if you want, or just look at any ones you want.

But please tell me what you think!

Posted: 9/8/2003, 5:10 pm
by Baby Thief
Here's one of my best works:

The Chapter Of Life That No One Wants To Tell

Young man can't seem to find out
That time cannot fix his past
Though how does he know time
When nothing good seems to last
When he can't seem to grab hold
Of any second he longs to keep
And that memory falls away
It falls into him, it falls too deep.

He was fooled into believing
That everyone has a purpose
So every hit to his strong ego
Is sent too far past his surface
And the young man does not notice
That countless others have tried
To stop their ego from breaking
No one succeeded, but they all lied.

Young man protects his wrongdoings
From his own future to see
He does not know he can't protect his past
From the person he will end up to be.

He didn't know time won't fix his past
His ignorance watched him as he fell
Sadly this is the chapter of life
That no one wants to tell.

Posted: 9/8/2003, 6:43 pm
by Mechanical Thought
I see OLP influence, definately. And there was one that reminded me of a Sum 41 song as well. :freak: I can't remember which, but yes.

Posted: 9/8/2003, 6:51 pm
by Baby Thief
Yeah, that one i just posted popped into my head when listening to some OLP.

Posted: 9/22/2003, 2:34 pm
by Baby Thief
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