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you won't catch me (or anyone for that matter) behind the wh

Posted: 7/5/2003, 3:13 pm
by committed
you won't catch me (or anyone for that matter) behind the wheel of a toyota ever again

all alone and nothing to do
somehow my mind switched to you
and all the shit you put me through
but this time there was something new

tired of a neverending fight
now i have to set things right
hidden under the cover of night
toyota dealership in my sight

you sent my dreams up in flames
i think it's time i did the same
staring at your picture frame
i lit a match and cursed your name

revenge is sweet and so is fire
tossed into the lap of a liar
my answer to everything is kerosene

Posted: 7/6/2003, 3:17 pm
by areusad831
pretty sweet

AK3 inspired eh?

Posted: 7/6/2003, 3:33 pm
by Candy-coated Fake
I love it. You have to write music to this...it'd be a great song.

Posted: 7/6/2003, 5:44 pm
by committed
alk3 inspired a little. it's really contrived. it's decent. i like the third verse and the last line. i had both of those parts for a while so i wrote the other two verses and the the two next to last lines in like half an hour. and it's ok. but i think it's fun. and i hate toyotas damnit.

Posted: 7/6/2003, 5:45 pm
by committed
thanks by the way

Posted: 7/6/2003, 6:58 pm
by Sufjan Stevens
I really like what you wrote Jeff. You've got a clever wit to you that is comparable to Matt Skiba. I am not saying that you rip him off or anything, because you don't, I am just saying that you write clever lines and can be humorous. Another superb work my friend.

Posted: 7/6/2003, 7:20 pm
by committed
i mean it guys. i've got some really good stuff started. like 30 songs on my computer. i usually start with a really good line and build off it. so it's coming. i'm so close to being good at this. :)

Posted: 7/6/2003, 11:57 pm
by Candy-coated Fake
Where do you get your inspiration?

Posted: 7/7/2003, 7:21 am
by committed
interaction with people

Posted: 7/7/2003, 7:28 am
by Lando
With me mainly... but we're not going to get into what kind of interaction...

Posted: 7/7/2003, 7:39 am
by committed
also from other songs

Posted: 7/7/2003, 4:19 pm
by committed
as well as movies and occasionally from dreams