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Posted: 4/26/2003, 10:24 pm
by Joey
I'm not one to post anything I write. ever. but meh. feel free to voice your opinions.

Breathe in
One last breath
So tired
Of feeling nothing
Hold on
To the empty bottle
Give in
Let the blade be your guide
Let go
It's what you want
Don't be afraid
The darkness will swallow you
Breathe out
One last breath

Posted: 4/26/2003, 11:05 pm
by Dr. Hobo
i like it a lot joey, i think its well written and beautiful :thumbs:
way to go hon

Posted: 4/26/2003, 11:34 pm
by One-Eye
Very, very good. :thumbs:

But now I'm depressed. :(

Posted: 4/27/2003, 7:01 pm
by happening fish
Ah that captures depression sooo well :(