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"Remember me, but Ah! Forget my fate."

Posted: 4/17/2003, 8:44 pm
by sandsleeper
As we stumble forth into the inevitable
Tears streak not our faces.
Bravely,
Boldly,
We claw each other senseless.

Too deaf to hear our own shrill cries
echo through the valley;
too daft to even recognize
this common, hopeless plea:

"May our final exhalation
ring no louder than precedent!
May the end of this fine line
be marked no bolder than it's length!"

We all must make some room
in our collective hearts,
take ourselves in wholly
while we are swallowed by the dark.

Posted: 4/17/2003, 8:57 pm
by areusad831
:thumbs:

jeff buckley :drool:

when i grow up im gonna be like kimmy

Posted: 4/17/2003, 8:59 pm
by sandsleeper
well, son, if you dedicate yourself to living on the computer chair and eating bags of chocolate chips you can accomplish anything.

Posted: 4/18/2003, 12:01 am
by One-Eye
*is transfixed at Kimmy's majesty*

I am not worthy!

Posted: 4/18/2003, 7:04 am
by sandsleeper
thanks aerin! coming from one of the cm's poetry gurus that truly is a big compliment. :mrgreen:

Posted: 4/18/2003, 8:37 am
by happening fish
Truly beautiful :nod:

Posted: 4/18/2003, 12:03 pm
by sandsleeper
merci.

oh wait... that's "over" :lol:

Posted: 4/23/2003, 8:03 pm
by sandsleeper
short. and not all that good. just felt like postin it.

shut your ears

now that i'm here i have nothing to say.

i've nothing to say but wish someone would listen.

the problem is me,
the problem is now.



don't reach out your hand for i'll strike it










down.

Posted: 4/24/2003, 5:39 pm
by happening fish
Rife with emotion. I see you been taking form lessons from e.e. cummings... very nice indeed :nod:

Posted: 4/24/2003, 11:09 pm
by sandsleeper
:mrgreen: just a wee bit. it's not screwed up enough though. :lol: