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I left you
expecting you’d be there
on my return

A call. It broke
the silence of the night
what’s wrong?

Its your grandfather
all I can think of is
how much I’ll miss you

We connected together so well
you were like my best friend
memories bring tears to my eyes

So I closed them
when I do, I can dream
dream of the times we used to have

With my eyes shut,
my imagination paints a picture in my head
but inside I know you’re dead.

thats really pretty. That reminds me of my grandfather who passed away a few years ago. I was really close to him too.

That was really good...

thanks... its really the first poem i've ever written

beginners luck just kidding, i thought it was really good

O_L_P JUNKY wrote:thanks... its really the first poem i've ever written

That's a really pretty poem! You should definately keep writing!