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Hey all, I have a new script in the process and I was wondering if you guys wouldn't mind giving your opinion on what I have so far. It's going to be a short movie, so the pacing is a little fast. Thanks in advance to those who bother.

it seems very memento-esque. it's hard to form an opinion on it because it hasnt really gone anywhere yet. i'd be interested to read it again when you've gotten further along in the plot.

I appreciate your comment and I'll be posting a big updated version by tomorrow morning. Hopefully it'll give you a better idea of where this is going.

Okay everyone, I have a finished version of the script to my new short filmed titled: "The Hitman." If you would be kind enough to take some time to read it and tell me what you think, I'd be most appreciated.

Thanks again to all those in advance.

P.S. Don't be afraid to post anything critical, it's what I'm looking for here.

Wow you're the one who's making the Vin Diesel movie based on the popular video game series!?

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0465494/

Teedus, you should've told us!

Hey everyone, the new movie is made and ready to be viewed by the public. If you're interested in seeing it, head to this link:

http://s50.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0VWW ... RCEK61S845

Note: The opening and closing credits contain music from Healthy in Paranoid Times (Walking In Circles to be exact) so if you don't wanna hear that, then don't download.

Thanks in advance to those who do

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