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Here is a song that I wrote.

Posted: 2/13/2005, 3:19 pm
by One-Eye
Recovery

Please let me know what you think of it. It's piano + a lyric track, which I'd sing if I didn't sound like a dying donkey everytime I try to sing.

Lyrics:

I tore my skin off yesterday
I feel better now
All my futures thrown away
I should have known all truths decay
I have become the game I play
I feel better now

I’ve painted skin on over bones
I feel better now
Those lies were all I’d ever known
And I am stitched of scars I’ve grown
At least my madness is my own
I feel better now

My corpse is smiling with fleshless mirth
I feel better now
Black progeny of this rebirth
I’m dead and buried in the earth
It’s all more trouble than it’s worth
I feel better now

Posted: 2/13/2005, 4:12 pm
by reza
*scared*

'tis good :D

Posted: 2/13/2005, 4:17 pm
by One-Eye
Scared?

Posted: 2/13/2005, 4:53 pm
by Rusty
I like it. I like it a lot.

Posted: 2/13/2005, 8:46 pm
by laurel
i loooove the piano.

when would the lyrics kick in with the piano, though? i'm just trying to get an idea of it with lyrics and piano going.

Posted: 2/13/2005, 10:42 pm
by One-Eye
Lyrics are the voxsynth track. The intro is 4 bars with left hand, then 8 bars with both hands, then the lyrics kick in.

Posted: 2/14/2005, 1:03 am
by Joe Cooler
Wow, i'm quite impressed. You should really try and sing it out though.

Posted: 2/14/2005, 2:42 am
by nikki4982
Why did I not know of this talent of yours til now?!? :freak:

VERY nice job. :clap:

Posted: 2/14/2005, 8:07 am
by One-Eye
:mrgreen: Thanks, guys.