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Posted: 1/3/2006, 6:48 am
by nikki4982
I was gonna say the same thing. Amazing.
Posted: 1/3/2006, 1:34 pm
by Soozy
What Jenny and Nikki said.

Posted: 2/3/2006, 9:41 pm
by afealicious
i wrote a poem for a contest.....did it in under 30 minutes because it was timed.
i uh yeah um there are so many actually talented writers here so if possible, constructive criticism please.
The Electrocuted Spider
You might find me knocked out
Clutching the sky and probable stardom.
What feeling! The finest threads trailing with conductivity
Wires and current and more current and
Too bad it hurts you when you don’t want to feel the flow.
It happens sometimes. When it does, it feels incessant.
Acrid with bright lights and sour smoke, upside down, twitching insistently,
The Extravagant Eight! We’ll be famous.
I can’t control myself.
But I’m not dead with stage fright, right? What is
Wrong
With my legs doing a jittery dance on this platform of empty air?
Posted: 2/3/2006, 10:41 pm
by Waiting to Exist
I like it.
Posted: 2/4/2006, 9:38 pm
by Hope
http://s7.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0XCX8 ... 195SOQ0UNK
PEOPLE
DOWNLOAD
NOW
CAUSE
ITS
GOOD
AND
YOU
CAN
SING
ALONG
TOO!
Posted: 2/4/2006, 9:39 pm
by Hope
btw: this is Afe Jen's work. she played the piano part to Ben Folds Five's "selfless, cold, and composed."
Posted: 2/4/2006, 9:40 pm
by afealicious
the song is Ben Folds Five's "Selfless, Cold, and Composed" so check that out because it's a nice song and it's easier to follow along if you do. i speed and screw up in many places. bah bah bah i hope you like it i wish i could sing
Posted: 2/4/2006, 9:41 pm
by Hope
*listens to it again*
Posted: 2/4/2006, 9:42 pm
by afealicious
heh. hehheehehhhhh.
Posted: 2/4/2006, 9:44 pm
by starseed_10
Posted: 2/4/2006, 9:48 pm
by Johnny
14 minutes

Posted: 2/4/2006, 9:49 pm
by afealicious
14 is the best number.
Posted: 2/4/2006, 9:52 pm
by Waiting to Exist
I've heard you play this before. But I like this one too.
Posted: 2/4/2006, 9:59 pm
by Johnny
1 minute! O: o:
Posted: 2/4/2006, 10:11 pm
by Rusty
Hope wrote:http://s7.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0XCX8UQUSBT302AP195SOQ0UNK
PEOPLE
DOWNLOAD
NOW
CAUSE
ITS
GOOD
AND
YOU
CAN
SING
ALONG
TOO!
I listened. It was good.
Posted: 2/5/2006, 5:52 am
by nikki4982
*jealous of Jen's skills* Awesome.
Posted: 3/22/2006, 5:00 pm
by afealicious
<b>Why Everybody Should Go To China
Part 1: The Artsier Stuff</b>
(part 2 will go in Photos at Random and will include stuff that i don't consider very pretty

. sorry about picture size for some of them. [EDIT! they are now urls] thanks to tdg for uploading for me.)
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i192/ ... rip047.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i192/ ... rip037.jpg
Posted: 3/22/2006, 5:18 pm
by afealicious
Posted: 3/22/2006, 5:50 pm
by Kathy
wow - so many great shots!!!

Posted: 3/22/2006, 7:45 pm
by don't ask why
Wow China looks so sweet
