Human Cloning

.::v0kaledGe::. · Post by **.::v0kaledGe::.** » 1/27/2003, 5:36 pm

oh god no.

christa lynn · Post by **christa lynn** » 1/27/2003, 6:01 pm

Possible thesis statement type dealio:

"I believe that cloning is wrong because of the possible health problems often found in clones, physically, mentally and emotionally; and because of the risk to the serogate mothers of the clones."

. . . . or some such thing. Put it in your own words.

Also, reduce that statistic or serogate mothers to 1/3, it sounds better than 4/12. :nod:

I thought it was very good for grade 7 as well.

.::v0kaledGe::. · Post by **.::v0kaledGe::.** » 1/27/2003, 6:15 pm

Thanks guys. But the trouble is see, that we had an outline we had to form before writing the entire draft of an essay. There was a Thesis, 2 Reasons, Explanation of Why You Feel This Way and Proof to Back It Up. I chose "Mental & Emotional Risks to the cloned beings" and "Lack of genetic diversity in the gene pool." My first reason is quite large as I got a lot of proof so I decided to split it up into two reasons. The health one, being the lost lives and the other being the mental & emotional damage to the cloned beings that do survive. So, I "conferenced" with the teacher and, being the stubborn person that she is, wouldn't even listen to what I was saying and told me to go back to the drawing board and re-write it using the basic formula in the outline. Stupid teacher. Here's my revised version I haven't finished yet, coming up.

lora · Post by **lora** » 1/27/2003, 6:21 pm

so much for teachers trying to expand the depths of imagination and creativity...

Mechanical Thought · Post by **Mechanical Thought** » 1/27/2003, 6:27 pm

my teachers have all been pretty godd that way.
its my class that sucks. a majority of them are so stupid that they have no idea what i'm talking about, let alone understand what i mean. its sad, but true.

.::v0kaledGe::. · Post by **.::v0kaledGe::.** » 1/28/2003, 6:50 pm

i truly am in love

emily · Post by **emily** » 1/28/2003, 6:54 pm

with your teacher?

Gimme_Shelter · Post by **Gimme_Shelter** » 1/28/2003, 8:39 pm

im in love with their teacher also

Axtech · Post by **Axtech** » 1/29/2003, 8:03 am

G_S: Did you get your screen name from Jeremy Hudson's book?

megxyz128 · Post by **megxyz128** » 1/29/2003, 3:29 pm

I thought it was a Rolling Stones reference?