Liam's New Song #2

liam · Post by **liam** » 6/23/2003, 7:44 pm

This one's slower and deeper (in my opinion) good maybe for an acoustic or piano song... i like it tho

139: Beautiful Thunder

Put your hand in, this disaster
watch it go in, every direction
Take a sip from, this fountain
see the joys of, beautiful thunder
All the likes are, incoherent
who we are is, saying so different
Here's a gift to, your resentment
like a child, with no perfection

And I'm thinking, bout you tonight
and I can't get myself to sleep
And I wonder how tomorrow will be
and how to trash the love I can't keep

Put your wings out, into the open
don't let anyone, take them away
Climb a mountain, into heaven
where you've been since the start

And I'm thinking, bout you tonight
And I Can't get myself to sleep
And I wonder how tomorrow will be
and how to trash the love I can't keep

And I don't wanna the fix the world...
And I don't wanna wait around anymore...
And I don't wanna hit the ground...
But just to keep what i have found...

So, put your hand in, this disaster
watch it go in, every direction
Take a sip from, this fountain
See the Joys of Beautiful thunder

And I'm thinking, bout you tonight
And I Can't get myself to sleep
And I wonder how tomorrow will be
and how to trash the love I can't keep
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Axtech · Post by **Axtech** » 6/23/2003, 7:47 pm

I can definately see this over an acoustic guitar. :nod:

Maybe an acousitc guitar with a piano to accent the harmony.

liam · Post by **liam** » 6/23/2003, 7:50 pm

yeah... that song was stranger for considering the words came to me when i watching some strange ass video on MTV... oh well influence is everywhere

i think its about finding more in something than you thought you would.
and you'll find something ratther ironic with the next on i post in a little while... ((which is my latest writing))

Axtech · Post by **Axtech** » 6/23/2003, 7:51 pm

There's some influence over there!

no, wait. That's just a stain on the rug... I should clean that up.

liam · Post by **liam** » 6/23/2003, 7:52 pm

liam · Post by **liam** » 6/23/2003, 7:58 pm

this ones about looking at something and thinking its so much more than what it really is... ironic eh?> its also my latest, i wrote it earlier today... actually just a few hours ago...

140: So Much More Than The Real Thing

I dreamt up an antidote
to the love i've been seekin
I've been way up high and down low

I think it was in heaven
where you were the queen
and i was oh i was your king

so much more than the real thing
too much more than everything
so much more than the real thing
and when i think i'm in love
yeah i'll just have to think

I felt like you were a god
to the answers i was prayin for
but you would never come to tell me

Ohhh, all i wanted was an answer
and all you gave me was this confusion
i've been waiting up here just to think...

so much more than the real thing
too much more than everything
so much more than the real thing
and when i think i'm in love
yeah i'll just have to think

and you were running when you were still
and you were more when you were none
and i was the one... and i was the one

and you were running when you were still
and you were more when you were none
and i was the one... and i was the one
And i was the one you let go...

I think you were a goddess
and a queen you could've been
oh and i, oh and i would be your king

so much more than the real thing
too much more than everything
so much more than the real thing
and when i think i'm in love
yeah i'll just have to think

Axtech · Post by **Axtech** » 6/23/2003, 7:59 pm

Woah. I just realized that 140 is the number of songs you've written! WOW!

liam · Post by **liam** » 6/23/2003, 8:01 pm

thanks... i've been writing since about the end of 6th grade... and i must say alot of my older stuff is weak and is really shit

liam · Post by **liam** » 6/24/2003, 8:07 am

Lots of different emotion showing in this one, i figure it could turn into something loud but good, but it seems too grunge.

141: Sit and Stay

I watch the sky and all the
pretty things that die
I listen for all the things
that everyone adores
I sit and think like
everyone that I hate

Come on, i'm on my way
Come on, I'll sit and i'll stay
Come on, i'll beg for you
the way you always wanted me to
you always wanted me to

I stay alive as much
as everyone who dies
I will strive just like
the past i have to hide
and i will fail just as much
as everyone and you

Come on, i'm on my way
Come on, I'll sit and stay
Come on, i'll beg for you
the way you always wanted me to
you always wanted me to

And Now I'm...
And now i'm no... one... but... you
And Now i'm no... where... but...here...
Come and Stay, Come and Stay, Come and Stay...

Come on, i'm on my way
Come on, I'll sit and stay
Come on, i'll beg for you
the way you always wanted me to
you always wanted me to

happening fish · Post by **happening fish** » 6/24/2003, 10:18 am

emily · Post by **emily** » 6/24/2003, 12:22 pm

#140: how does she change from a god to a goddess?

liam · Post by **liam** » 6/25/2003, 5:57 am

does it matter?

happening fish · Post by **happening fish** » 6/25/2003, 10:13 am

well it implies that she changed gender...

emily · Post by **emily** » 6/25/2003, 11:26 am

maybe he's talking about stinkythecat

happening fish · Post by **happening fish** » 6/25/2003, 11:42 am

i sure hope not

liam · Post by **liam** » 6/25/2003, 1:28 pm

he he he he he, i will change the line sooner or later. Hopefully sooner. God i love this site

liam · Post by **liam** » 7/9/2003, 6:11 am

I haven't been here a while do to me being in new hampshire so i have some new stuff to throw at all of you.Heres the first 2 of the 7.

143: The Patient

How do you feel do you feel its nothing
will you let it haunt you? will you let me haunt you on this?
Come on up here, i'll show you a secret
Don't get harmed it's all my fault.

Are we doing more than this?
Must you throw it all away?

I'm coming for your love
i'm coming for you heart
i'm coming for your love
coming to rip it all apart
there's only one of you
there's only one of me
a patient in your arms
and that patient is me

Now that you hate, what do you love?
Did it tell you? Didn't i tell you? about this
Come on up here, tell me your feelings
And i'll tell you, which ones i want.

Are we doing more than this?
Must you throw it all away?

I'm coming for your love
i'm coming for you heart
i'm coming for your love
coming to rip it all apart
there's only one of you
there's only one of me
a patient in your arms
and that patient is me

where could i be, where could i go?
Shouldn't I've told you? [Isn't That] What friends are for?
Walk your way up here, i'll show you a diamond
But you'll steal it with all of the regrets

Are we doing more than this?
Must you throw it all away?

I'm coming for your love
i'm coming for you heart
i'm coming for your love
coming to rip it all apart
there's only one of you
there's only one of me
a patient in your arms
and that patient is me

Couldn't I rest? Couldn't I lie?
Could it be you who let me die?
Shouldn't I sweat? Should i Survive?
Why won't you let me stay alive?

Are we doing more than this?
Must you throw it all away?

I'm coming for your love
i'm coming for you heart
i'm coming for your love
coming to rip it all apart
there's only one of you
there's only one of me
a patient in your arms
and that patient is me

and that patient is me.
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144: All Your "Why's" (Lose it again)

A walking cancer, walking beside you
unwanted arrest, what do you do?
Look for an answer surpass a dream
Were you there? [And] did you scream?
Under Arrest, Under God
Is there a difference? Is it that hard?
Walk for confusion, see the real you
or is it me? Will you ever choose?

And it's me
and it's you
Come for a hero
you never do
Go for a walk
go for a ride
Go for a miracle
Give me all of your "why's"

A new disease, follows you
A little white pill, what do you do?
Throw it away, concentrate again
are you neglected? Are they your friends?
Under the influence, Under confusion
Is he there, or is this an allusion?
Moral disaster, and unfinished thoughts
your mind clears [with]... GUNSHOTS...

And it's me
and it's you
Come for a hero
you never lose
Go for a walk
go for a ride
Go for a miracle
Give me all of your "why's"

Losing a friend
losing your mind
losing again
No more Time
Losing a friend
losing your mind
Lose it again
just one more time

Losing a friend
losing your mind
losing again
No more time
Lose it again
Lose it again
Lose it again
just one more time

And it's me
and it's you
Come for a hero
you never do
Go for a walk
go for a ride
Go for a miracle
Give me all of your "why's"

Go for a walk
go for a ride
go for a miracle
Say your last goodbyes.

liam · Post by **liam** » 7/10/2003, 10:59 am

well... that works.

robcore · Post by **robcore** » 7/10/2003, 10:55 pm

LIAM!!! Your songs are my pimp.

liam · Post by **liam** » 7/11/2003, 8:01 am

i like wording on that bruddah. Thanks