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heHe.. thankIes, but i knOw i do.. :P i'm onLy a lil oldEr than yoU.. 14.. almOst 15 (in jUne.. liKe yoU) :)
dreaM as if you'll liVe... live as if yOu'll die..

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Lolz- koolz- go june peoplez! hehe.. i no im a weirdo lolzz--- anywayz- na ur stuff doesent suck at all- my opinion it rox!
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(Pause after each line and accent the first word of each stanza)

Pain

Pain
swirling
in this echo
of space

Colour
blotched
all over
this place

Time
draining
all energy
from me

Rage
coming
pouring
through me

Hands
reaching
squeezing
to choke me

Light
seeping
fading
from me

Hope
going
backwards
this pace


Cage
trapped
inside
I'm victim

Soon
never
quite ready
for me

Death
freely
taking
my life
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8O kinda dark....... but its good
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Goodbye

I'm lost again
in a croud of bland faces
how I lost them all
how they lost me
everything seems hazy now
the only thing real
is the pain

Nevermind who said hello
too many said goodbye
they no longer hold on
no longer cling to me, to us
I can't touch
their tired fingertips
that forsook the friendship
that was my light

Clod brought me back
I sieze the knife
how it happened
how it ends
nothing, now, is felt here
left too much room
between me and them

Today no-one said hello
they all had said goodbye
with no rope left to grasp
they left me falling
in this abyss
the darkness
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Many of my poems are dark. I write them to purge those feelings. That's how I deal with this screwed up world.
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i agree
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"Pussies dont like dicks, cause pussies get fucked by dicks.. but dicks also fuck assholes. Assholes who just wanna shit on everything. Pussies may think they can deal with assholes their way, but the only thing that can fuck an asshole is a dick.. with some balls." - team america
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these are lyrics rather then peotry but yeah...

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this life it walks beside of me
right down the street of apathy
just matching stride so typicaly
moving away so carelesly

sleep on it

open the door into this state
the clothes you wear so second rate
fade away refuse to relate
you dont feel good you dont feel hate

sleep on it
maybe you will see it then
sleep on it
so careless, dumb and lost in fate

everything runs away from me tonight
slowly traveling towards the light
shadows on your face of respite
ill be watching from a great height

sleep on it
maybe you will see it then
sleep on it
so careless, dumb and lost in fate

i for one
dont care that much for apathy
and i for one
cant fight the force of gravity
and i
and i

sleep on it
maybe you will see it then
sleep on it
so careless, dumb and lost in fate
so carless dumb and lost in...
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but i love a few things
and you are one.... of them" - Eels

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just needed to post a poem.. i just wrote this.. i know it sucks pretty bad.. but i needed something to help me right now.. don't even really know why i'm posting it.. fuck.. oh well.. here it is..

When I look into your eyes
All I see is madness
All I feel is hate
Words flow from your lips
Meant to comfort, caress
Shred my skin
Scorch my feelings
Everything you fucking said
Was all a lie
Streaming from your mouth
Like putrid maggots
Feeding from the rancid slabs of decaying flesh
You ask me to be happy
Offer me the world
Yet steal it back again
Just to fuck with my head
Fuck you
I don’t care
You ask me to be joyful
After yours words have disheveled any thoughts of joy
What am I supposed to do?
I’m not a fucking bouncy ball
To jump
Up and down
Sad and happy
Whatever your choosing
My feelings are my own
Fuck you
I don’t care
Every time you say goodbye
It tears me up inside
No matter how hard I try to say
You mean nothing to me
My heart holds onto you
Refuses to release its iron grip
Just leave
I’ll drown my feelings out
Other things will take your place
Envelop me in their warming embraces…
So I may walk through the fields of eternal unknowing
Eternal jadedness
I do it anyways
Fuck you
dreaM as if you'll liVe... live as if yOu'll die..

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i feel your pain stephi :cry:
that was beautiful

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um guys i need some help. i wrote this... but i'm not sure who or what it's about. i realize that's confusing but... i dunno... i need help figuring this out. it's short, but please read the worlds carefully and try and feel the sense they convey.


"Not Love"

I think that
The air feels empty without
Your smell to fill it

I think that
The curve of your lips must
Hold some secrets

I think that
Your dizzying eyes can
Squeeze my breath out
Until all I breathe is you
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It sounds as if you're obsessed with somebody, but not because of any feelings in your heart. You want them to desire you . . . I think.
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Hmmm.... that's an interesting interpretation...
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Hmmm ... *scratches head* ... you are unsure with the words or what they mean by the repitition of "i think that" .... sounds like it could be about a forbidden lover ... that is just my humble concrete opinion.
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lol, geeze you guys, now you've really got me doing some soul-searching :freak:
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ok i think i've just gotten too careless with this one so it possibly might just suck majorly.

I

I'm not that fast
I'm not that strong
I'm not your genius
I'm not your hero
I'm not
I'm not
I'm not
I am only a life
I am only a body
I am only a soul
I am only
I am only
I am flaccid
I am grateful
I am
Lick a finger: feel the now.
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and then theres this one that i basically just wrote after i gave something my all and broke my ass and recieved shit back.


Child of the Earth
Who has seen all she can bear
And who breathes her exhausted breaths
Into the caked red dirt

As a bud you have grown
And as a leaf you have fallen
The rays of the sun directed to another
You can render us nourishment no more

If only like the sweet and tender fruit
You could bear to us your pit
And impregnate our world with your truth
Then we could have hope

Alas, you cannot
O child of the earth
It is your time to weep and to wither
And bless us as we perish

Return home, dear child
For we are no kin to you
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I don't know what you call this, but I had a bad day in class and I thought this when I walked out the door:

I walk out
From the Hades
Also known as
English class.

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I feel the same way about my english class
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We tried to watch a documentary about William Golding today, and all the morons made fart noises so the teacher made us read silently. I was slightly aggravated.

This happens every day.
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