Posted: 9/20/2002, 6:14 pm
Me like. 
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Posted: 9/20/2002, 6:16 pm
Aerin thanks, and also thanks for just coming to the thread... ilove you... :starts crying:...:stops crying: thanks
Posted: 9/20/2002, 8:26 pm
Awesome Ryan. Very very good.
Posted: 9/21/2002, 4:33 am
thank you
Posted: 10/3/2002, 2:50 pm
91: One More
He never acted this way before
and no one knew the truth, no open door
he never began to give me "real"
but no one noticed when his lips were sealed
Underneath that deep sensation
is another concentration
reliving the pain and all that was wrong
it must have been bad cause its been so long
I've been waiting here
for a thousand years
i've been waiting for you
i've been waiting for something so true
And as she turned her head
to walk out that door
he had just given her just one more
She had a lifelong best friend
she hadn't seen him in a long ten
she went to him with her open arms
and he let her in with his charm
And he used to love her so
she didn't want him and just let him go
reliving the pain and all that was wrong
it must have been bad cause its been so long
I've been waiting here
for a thousand years
i've been waiting for you
i've been waiting for something so true
And as she turned her head
to walk out that door
he had just given her just one more
She ended up living with her friend
and the story was never braught up again
and they're getting married next week
and they'll be never with love to seek
Underneath that deep sensation
is another concentration
reliving the pain and all that was wrong
it must have been bad cause its been so long
I've been waiting here
for a thousand years
i've been waiting for you
i've been waiting for something so true
And as she turned her head
to walk out that door
he had just given her just one more
He never acted this way before
and no one knew the truth, no open door
he never began to give me "real"
but no one noticed when his lips were sealed
Underneath that deep sensation
is another concentration
reliving the pain and all that was wrong
it must have been bad cause its been so long
I've been waiting here
for a thousand years
i've been waiting for you
i've been waiting for something so true
And as she turned her head
to walk out that door
he had just given her just one more
She had a lifelong best friend
she hadn't seen him in a long ten
she went to him with her open arms
and he let her in with his charm
And he used to love her so
she didn't want him and just let him go
reliving the pain and all that was wrong
it must have been bad cause its been so long
I've been waiting here
for a thousand years
i've been waiting for you
i've been waiting for something so true
And as she turned her head
to walk out that door
he had just given her just one more
She ended up living with her friend
and the story was never braught up again
and they're getting married next week
and they'll be never with love to seek
Underneath that deep sensation
is another concentration
reliving the pain and all that was wrong
it must have been bad cause its been so long
I've been waiting here
for a thousand years
i've been waiting for you
i've been waiting for something so true
And as she turned her head
to walk out that door
he had just given her just one more
Posted: 10/3/2002, 5:26 pm
Very. Cool. Well written...love the words and the imagery...very nifty.
All of 'em.
All of 'em.
Posted: 10/3/2002, 5:30 pm
i have some more stuff, if you want you can IM me for them, or i can just post them (THE NEWBIE CAN LIVE!)
Posted: 10/3/2002, 5:36 pm
VERY DARK SUICIDE LIAM!
92: Mirror Full Of Hatred
I wanted to thank you
for this hatred
i set side
for you today
It can't be kind
all you critisize
toward me
when you are just the same
you know that I'm
All you wanted
another mild
disruption
I wanted to thank you
for this hatred
i set side
for you today
I wanted to please you
for this mirror
contains my hatred
and my fear-oh
I need to thank you
for this knife
i peirce myself
and my blessing
It takes time
its hell to pay
here's a good lesson
don't push me
I wanted to thank you
for this hatred
i set side
for you today
I wanted to please you
for this mirror
contains my hatred
and my fear-oh
Now Why you gonna stand there
giving me your sympathy
Is that your starting to see
everything you've done to me
Now Why you gonna stand there
giving me your sympathy
Or is it that you want me to be
Your Every, Your Every
But I wanted to thank you
for this hatred
i set side
for you today
I wanted to please you
for this mirror
contains my hatred
and my fear-oh
I wanted thank you
i got you a gift today
its on the floor
of my bedroom
I wanted to hurt you
for your misconception
I wanted to thank you
just Pardon The Interuption,
I wanted to thank you
for this hatred
i set side
for you today
I wanted to please you
for this mirror
contains my hatred
and my fear-oh
92: Mirror Full Of Hatred
I wanted to thank you
for this hatred
i set side
for you today
It can't be kind
all you critisize
toward me
when you are just the same
you know that I'm
All you wanted
another mild
disruption
I wanted to thank you
for this hatred
i set side
for you today
I wanted to please you
for this mirror
contains my hatred
and my fear-oh
I need to thank you
for this knife
i peirce myself
and my blessing
It takes time
its hell to pay
here's a good lesson
don't push me
I wanted to thank you
for this hatred
i set side
for you today
I wanted to please you
for this mirror
contains my hatred
and my fear-oh
Now Why you gonna stand there
giving me your sympathy
Is that your starting to see
everything you've done to me
Now Why you gonna stand there
giving me your sympathy
Or is it that you want me to be
Your Every, Your Every
But I wanted to thank you
for this hatred
i set side
for you today
I wanted to please you
for this mirror
contains my hatred
and my fear-oh
I wanted thank you
i got you a gift today
its on the floor
of my bedroom
I wanted to hurt you
for your misconception
I wanted to thank you
just Pardon The Interuption,
I wanted to thank you
for this hatred
i set side
for you today
I wanted to please you
for this mirror
contains my hatred
and my fear-oh
Posted: 10/3/2002, 6:28 pm
LIAM wrote:I wanted to thank you
for this hatred
i set side
for you today
Wow, powerful. Just one thing: I believe you mean "aside"(sp?), not just "side".
Posted: 10/3/2002, 7:00 pm
i'd say so...
Posted: 10/7/2002, 2:25 pm
93:Identity Chrisis
Metalic Brains
Working On Command
Corrupting Everyone
But No one Cares
Plug Me In
Turn Me On
Induce Yourself
To The World
Erase Yourself
Identity Chrisis
Mirror Yourslef
To begin another
Crack the password
Take what you want
but when it all comes down
You know your not
We'll take your jobs
at local stores
We'll choose your life
and operate
We look the same
almost every year
S.O.A. all the time
but no one questions us
Erase Yourself
Identity Chrisis
Mirror Yourslef
To begin another
Crack the password
Take what you want
but when it all comes down
You know your not
Virtual Suspect
uncompressing names
unpack my file
fill in the blanks
Portable communication
the wrist watch
never looked so bad
But don't come any closer
You do not know me by name
I'm like you I only play games
I Am Your desciple
I Am Your Slave
And You Get Pissed
When I, MisBehave
Restart Me again
Over And Over
I'll only keep growing
And then Take Over, You....
Erase Yourself
Identity Chrisis
Mirror Yourself
To begin another
Crack the password
Take what you want
but when it all comes down
You know your not
If you noticed its kinda something i picked up off the ground when i was thinking along the lines of Spiritual Machines a Kickass disc telling us what we are and we we need to be.
Metalic Brains
Working On Command
Corrupting Everyone
But No one Cares
Plug Me In
Turn Me On
Induce Yourself
To The World
Erase Yourself
Identity Chrisis
Mirror Yourslef
To begin another
Crack the password
Take what you want
but when it all comes down
You know your not
We'll take your jobs
at local stores
We'll choose your life
and operate
We look the same
almost every year
S.O.A. all the time
but no one questions us
Erase Yourself
Identity Chrisis
Mirror Yourslef
To begin another
Crack the password
Take what you want
but when it all comes down
You know your not
Virtual Suspect
uncompressing names
unpack my file
fill in the blanks
Portable communication
the wrist watch
never looked so bad
But don't come any closer
You do not know me by name
I'm like you I only play games
I Am Your desciple
I Am Your Slave
And You Get Pissed
When I, MisBehave
Restart Me again
Over And Over
I'll only keep growing
And then Take Over, You....
Erase Yourself
Identity Chrisis
Mirror Yourself
To begin another
Crack the password
Take what you want
but when it all comes down
You know your not
If you noticed its kinda something i picked up off the ground when i was thinking along the lines of Spiritual Machines a Kickass disc telling us what we are and we we need to be.
Posted: 10/7/2002, 2:47 pm
High-qual, as usual, Liam. 
No h in crisis, though.
No h in crisis, though. Posted: 10/7/2002, 2:48 pm
Thanks Aerin, i guess the spamming got you to check it out.
Posted: 10/7/2002, 2:56 pm
Yeah, well, don't try that again! At least not in the Maida Mafia. Attack the Mazurites. They're bad news.
Posted: 10/7/2002, 3:48 pm
your sentences are really becoming short and to the point, it holds well. when you read it it's very abrupt but with music it would work well
Posted: 10/7/2002, 5:29 pm
thanks jim.
Posted: 10/7/2002, 6:06 pm
LIAM wrote:You know your not
you're
Nice, very nice.
Posted: 10/9/2002, 4:15 pm
Thanks everyone for all the support, i'll be posting a new one later.
Posted: 10/10/2002, 3:48 pm
Jim wrote that i was making my words short and too the point... that kinda got me pissed but Jim thanks, got me thinkin
95:Loosely Painted American
I've answered all these questions
and my Reason to decieve
Realize what i've got to number
Realize what I believe
Descendance of our forefathers
aren't we all the same
Fleeting to the people
Regreting that you came
Loosely painted american
Ship shape rat race
easy enough to see
your big dirty face
Another Gold Rush
underneath where we sleep
a building block, a cancer
taking all we've got to keep
Peace treaty to resign
all runs down your face
when life's taken away
Everythings Disgrace
Everything that matters
a system of art
where no one really preaches
And there is no more heart
Loosely painted american
Ship shape rat race
easy enough to see
your big dirty face
Another Gold Rush
underneath where we sleep
a building block, a cancer
taking all we've got to keep
Will You ever remember the pain I've saved
Will you ever remember the reason I've been blamed
Will You ever care, in this game of Hide and seek
Killing the Hearts of people and Staring down so weak
Loosely painted american
Ship shape rat race
easy enough to see
your big dirty face
Another Gold Rush
underneath where we sleep
a building block, a cancer
taking all we've got to keep
95:Loosely Painted American
I've answered all these questions
and my Reason to decieve
Realize what i've got to number
Realize what I believe
Descendance of our forefathers
aren't we all the same
Fleeting to the people
Regreting that you came
Loosely painted american
Ship shape rat race
easy enough to see
your big dirty face
Another Gold Rush
underneath where we sleep
a building block, a cancer
taking all we've got to keep
Peace treaty to resign
all runs down your face
when life's taken away
Everythings Disgrace
Everything that matters
a system of art
where no one really preaches
And there is no more heart
Loosely painted american
Ship shape rat race
easy enough to see
your big dirty face
Another Gold Rush
underneath where we sleep
a building block, a cancer
taking all we've got to keep
Will You ever remember the pain I've saved
Will you ever remember the reason I've been blamed
Will You ever care, in this game of Hide and seek
Killing the Hearts of people and Staring down so weak
Loosely painted american
Ship shape rat race
easy enough to see
your big dirty face
Another Gold Rush
underneath where we sleep
a building block, a cancer
taking all we've got to keep
Posted: 10/10/2002, 5:49 pm