Poetry, Art, Songs -- We want to see it!

2+2=5 · Post by **2+2=5** » 7/5/2002, 10:36 pm

Ok, I wrote this a few nights ago at about 1 AM... I don't know what I think of it, but here goes:

Dusk
________
Stone terrace
run away
from all those things
that you can't say
pools of tears
reflect the light
the holy water
saves the night
skip and laugh
and set your soul free
from the inhibitions
bestowed upon me
you don't deserve
to be let down
I hear your feet
hit the ground
don't be scared
I'll hear your voice
and we can admit
to having a choice
your gentle breath
floats away
I can only dream
Of you wanting to stay
_________________________________

nelison · Post by **nelison** » 7/5/2002, 10:39 pm

^ very nice... very nice indeed

Superman · Post by **Superman** » 7/5/2002, 10:43 pm

Emily Dickinson (or insert other famous poets name) has nothing on you my friend!

nelison · Post by **nelison** » 7/6/2002, 2:21 pm

OK i wrote this a while ago... it's somewhat similar to a thing written earlier but ya i figured might as well get it out, especially since at the moment i can't write anything more than a couple lines LOL

the girl next door

she sits alone, in her pain
ahe thinks am i really that insane?
She looks around, and sees a world so messed
but she wishes inside she was like the rest
somewhere, somehow she got lost
the crowd took off and she stayed crossed

*That girl she sits next door,
That girl that you ignore
a girl you know so well
thinks her life is hell

she sleeps alone, cries in fear
where's her friends she used to love so dear
she holds her bear, tells it her thoughts
why's she so different, she thinks a lot
even though she hides her thoughts from those who care
one day she knows, they'll stop and stare

*

She stands alone, the walls so bare
she screams aloud, yet no ones there
but she sees a kid, everyone thought was cool
and walks to her, and exclaims "fuck you!"
she turns around, and walks right out
she's smiling now, she's won this bout
[/u]

Uriko · Post by **Uriko** » 7/8/2002, 3:52 pm

<IMG SRC="http://hstrial-utoyono.homestead.com/files/SHSLV2picfinishedtext.jpg">

This is a new piccer I did up for my <A HREF="http://www.geocities.com/violent_mind2002/index.htm">Sad Hours Seem Long V2.0</A> site. The BG is stupid, cause I didn't feel like doing anything fancy on the BG of the site. XD Her nose looks extremly odd and long to me. XD Maybe it's my style of doing side glances.

Superman · Post by **Superman** » 7/8/2002, 5:12 pm

All the girls around where I live seem to be wearing that exact same clothing style. It must be the new fad or something. Nicely done anyways (pic/site)

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liam · Post by **liam** » 7/8/2002, 6:04 pm

i posted this in a different thread once.

Hang On

There's nothing wrong
this will pass
there's no more right
we try not to harass
this countries filled
with loyalty
hurry it up now
before they see

What have we done
we've disobeyed
in the name of the father
and this parade
nobody leaves this one mistake
we didn't actually mean to be this way

Hang On, Hang On
I won't let you say
you mean too much
but your slipping away
I need your touch
All and every day
but when we're close
the only feeling is hate

What have I done
to deserve this
another scream
another fist
now that your gone
i hope your happy
so far away
I know your better off without me

What have we done
we've disobeyed
in the name of the father
and this parade
nobody leaves this one mistake
we didn't actually mean to be this way

Hang On, Hang On
I won't let you say
you mean too much
but your slipping away
I need your touch
All and every day
but when we're close
the only feeling is hate

I never want you
to be lower than above
but that sad sad day
there was no love
I never want you
to be lower than above
but now i'm lonely
and i know i love- you

liam · Post by **liam** » 7/9/2002, 7:11 pm

ARGGG REPLY!

nelison · Post by **nelison** » 7/9/2002, 10:06 pm

haha you gotta do what i did... just start a new topic for you to post work in... i didnt get any notice for my thing above either...

but man its good stuff, keep it up, you write em and i'll be sure to read em

liam · Post by **liam** » 7/10/2002, 5:21 am

thanks

liam · Post by **liam** » 7/10/2002, 1:50 pm

Don't know how i cam to write this...

New Girlfriend

Can I Help You Today?

You want me to change
but i'll always remain the same
You want me to say
but i know you wanna here it-so just

Back off
Dreamin for a pshycho of a man
Back Off
Keep it on the man with no hands-left

You'd love me to be a man
the man you always wanted
This may seem a little rude
But I'll never change for you

You want me to change
but i'll always remain the same
You want me to say
but i know you wanna here it-so just

Back off
Dreamin for a pshycho of a man
Back Off
Keep it on the man with no hands-left

All my dreams are saved up
you aren't in them at all
There's Nothing Left To lose
so watch it fall down again

You want me to change
but i'll always remain the same
You want me to say
but i know you wanna here it-so just

Back off
Dreamin for a pshycho of a man
Back Off
Keep it on the man with no hands-left

I know that you want it bad
I know That you need me bad
But I won't Let You have me
So Why Don't You Just -

Back Off
Another Way To Say no
Back Off
Greet me while you say hello
Back Off
It will never be again
Back Off
I already have a new girlfriend

You want me to change
but i'll always remain the same
You want me to say
but i know you wanna here it-so just

Back off
Dreamin for a pshycho of a man
Back Off
Keep it on the man with no hands-left

So, Can I Help You Today?

.........................................................
i like it

christa lynn · Post by **christa lynn** » 7/10/2002, 10:15 pm

LIAM wrote:but i know you wanna here it-so just

hear

liam · Post by **liam** » 7/11/2002, 6:34 am

shitty little mistakes

christa lynn · Post by **christa lynn** » 7/11/2002, 7:17 pm

mistakes such as those are normal

call me andrew · Post by **call me andrew** » 7/11/2002, 9:04 pm

...unless you're a ....ROBOT!!!

Uriko · Post by **Uriko** » 7/12/2002, 4:57 pm

<IMG SRC="http://hstrial-utoyono.homestead.com/files/Dragon1colored.gif">

Here is an old pic that I did up. It was basically a try at a different style of CGing. I still need to get a LOT better though.

joe_canadian · Post by **joe_canadian** » 8/20/2002, 6:42 pm

Just a pic I fiddled with of everyone's favourite bassist..

http://www.arksoft.8m.com/Art/Image5.jpg

Kiss. My. Bass. :lol:

Edit: grrrr stupid 8m.com :mad:

you've gotta copy and paste the addy if ya wanna see it..

liam · Post by **liam** » 8/20/2002, 8:40 pm

Nice Job!

sandsleeper · Post by **sandsleeper** » 8/29/2002, 7:35 pm

k my newest photoshop creation, kinda a take off from my banner. it's still very much in the works so be kind!

happening fish · Post by **happening fish** » 8/29/2002, 8:02 pm

whoa! that hair trips me out