Posted: 6/23/2003, 7:53 am
si,... thanks rob...
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Posted: 6/23/2003, 8:55 am
yes, he is entited to his opinion, Stinky.
Posted: 6/23/2003, 9:29 am
This is a song i wrote about my brother
136: Leaving
Can you Hear me,
I'm standing infront of you screaming
Instead of waiting
for you to notice, for you to HIDE
I've left before now
You'll never see me again
Just before now
You'll never have your chance
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving now for good
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving like I should
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving this for good
You'll never impress me with your insults
i hear you ranting again
I fear you wasting all my time
I look at them again
I'll never question why
I've left before now
You'll never see me again
Just before now
You'll never have your chance
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving now for good
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving like I should
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving this for good
You'll never impress me with your insults
Waiting, Throwing, Wasting, Choking
Thinking, Passing, Casting, harassing
Mouthing, Talkining, Whining, Joking
Listening, Questioning, Remembering, Why?
I've left before now
You'll never see me again
Just before now
You'll never have your chance
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving now for good
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving like I should
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving this for good
You'll never impress me with your insults
136: Leaving
Can you Hear me,
I'm standing infront of you screaming
Instead of waiting
for you to notice, for you to HIDE
I've left before now
You'll never see me again
Just before now
You'll never have your chance
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving now for good
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving like I should
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving this for good
You'll never impress me with your insults
i hear you ranting again
I fear you wasting all my time
I look at them again
I'll never question why
I've left before now
You'll never see me again
Just before now
You'll never have your chance
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving now for good
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving like I should
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving this for good
You'll never impress me with your insults
Waiting, Throwing, Wasting, Choking
Thinking, Passing, Casting, harassing
Mouthing, Talkining, Whining, Joking
Listening, Questioning, Remembering, Why?
I've left before now
You'll never see me again
Just before now
You'll never have your chance
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving now for good
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving like I should
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving this for good
You'll never impress me with your insults
Posted: 6/23/2003, 11:37 am
LIAM wrote:This is a song i wrote about my brother
136: Leaving
Can you Hear me,
I'm standing infront of you screaming
Instead of waiting
for you to notice, for you to HIDE
I've left before now
You'll never see me again
Just before now
You'll never have your chance
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving now for good
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving like I should
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving this for good
You'll never impress me with your insults
i hear you ranting again
I fear you wasting all my time
I look at them again
I'll never question why
I've left before now
You'll never see me again
Just before now
You'll never have your chance
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving now for good
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving like I should
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving this for good
You'll never impress me with your insults
Waiting, Throwing, Wasting, Choking
Thinking, Passing, Casting, harassing
Mouthing, Talkining, Whining, Joking
Listening, Questioning, Remembering, Why?
I've left before now
You'll never see me again
Just before now
You'll never have your chance
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving now for good
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving like I should
And I'm leavin, and I'm leaving this for good
You'll never impress me with your insults
Juvenile rhymes. Nice try.
Posted: 6/23/2003, 4:48 pm
thanks... ? :cough:asshole:cough: he he he he he
Posted: 6/23/2003, 4:52 pm
stinky, whoever you are, you're a bitch.
I like it Liam. Your work is consistantly good.
I like it Liam. Your work is consistantly good.
Posted: 6/23/2003, 5:01 pm
thank you i have more to post too... i'll post them later on tonight...
Posted: 6/23/2003, 6:28 pm
i wrote this when i was online and my friends were mad at eachother
137: Back The To The Beginning
i'm not down
i'm awake
i've opened my eyes
if just for today
no one to see
no one to hear
but once it comes
theres nothing to fear
And here i go
i'm on my way
your standing up
while i walk away
And i'm bringing it back to the beginning
where it was once before
And i'm running away from all your hinting
and i guess i've come to lose it all
And I'm bringing it back to the beginning
where it was taken from me
and i'm running away from all of your hinting
and here it comes to shatter and fall
And I look
And I keep on walkin
I've just realized
what i've been wantin
Nothing to love
Nothing to hate
but here it is
and theres the fate
And here it goes
It's sets itself up
we're standing around
and we can see it close up
And i'm bringing it back to the beginning
where it was once before
And i'm running away from all your hinting
and i guess i've come to lose it all
And I'm bringing it back to the beginning
where it was taken from me
and i'm running away from all of your hinting
and here it comes to shatter and fall
And i'm bringin it back,
and i'm to the beginning
I'm bringin it back
And there it goes
Whlie it starts to cry
we're watching it
and it's finally opened its eyes
And i'm bringing it back to the beginning
where it was once before
And i'm running away from all your hinting
and i guess i've come to lose it all
And I'm bringing it back to the beginning
where it was taken from me
and i'm running away from all of your hinting
and here it comes to shatter and fall
137: Back The To The Beginning
i'm not down
i'm awake
i've opened my eyes
if just for today
no one to see
no one to hear
but once it comes
theres nothing to fear
And here i go
i'm on my way
your standing up
while i walk away
And i'm bringing it back to the beginning
where it was once before
And i'm running away from all your hinting
and i guess i've come to lose it all
And I'm bringing it back to the beginning
where it was taken from me
and i'm running away from all of your hinting
and here it comes to shatter and fall
And I look
And I keep on walkin
I've just realized
what i've been wantin
Nothing to love
Nothing to hate
but here it is
and theres the fate
And here it goes
It's sets itself up
we're standing around
and we can see it close up
And i'm bringing it back to the beginning
where it was once before
And i'm running away from all your hinting
and i guess i've come to lose it all
And I'm bringing it back to the beginning
where it was taken from me
and i'm running away from all of your hinting
and here it comes to shatter and fall
And i'm bringin it back,
and i'm to the beginning
I'm bringin it back
And there it goes
Whlie it starts to cry
we're watching it
and it's finally opened its eyes
And i'm bringing it back to the beginning
where it was once before
And i'm running away from all your hinting
and i guess i've come to lose it all
And I'm bringing it back to the beginning
where it was taken from me
and i'm running away from all of your hinting
and here it comes to shatter and fall
Posted: 6/23/2003, 6:32 pm
LIAM wrote:thanks... ? :cough:asshole:cough: he he he he he
It's my opinion.
Posted: 6/23/2003, 6:36 pm
yeah... yeah...
Posted: 6/23/2003, 6:41 pm
I'm hot. 
Posted: 6/23/2003, 6:44 pm
why don't you read my new song
Posted: 6/23/2003, 6:47 pm
i like it
Posted: 6/23/2003, 6:56 pm
thank you.
Posted: 6/23/2003, 7:26 pm
138: Standing In Line
I don't need to know why
you can keep it to your self
i don't wanna know how
you can throw it all away
I'm just standing in line
waiting to run ahead
i'm just caught up in fighting
that i'm just too bare
And i'm thinking and i'm hurting ((yeah))
And i think i'm gonna go tonight
and i don't know how your feeling ((you say))
but everyone knows a way to get to me
And i'm thinking bout tomorrow ((yeah))
and your wondering bout everything else
and i don't know how your feeling ((you say))
but everyone is thinking how low we can get
I don't need to know why
you can't stop thinking bout her
i don't wanna know how
you can throw all that away
and i'm just standing in line
waiting for my turn
i'm just caught up in love
where i'm just too scared
And i'm thinking and i'm hurting ((yeah))
And i think i'm gonna go tonight
and i don't know how your feeling ((you say))
but everyone knows a way to get to me
And i'm thinking bout tomorrow ((yeah))
and your wondering bout everything else
and don't know how your feeling ((you say))
but everyone is thinking how low we can get
Maybe we should talk
or maybe we should scream
or maybe we'd feel better
if we would just leave
Maybe its a joke
or maybe its a stab
or maybe we'd be better off
if we just got back
and i'm standing in line
waiting for this time
i'm just caught in love
and none of you understand,
well maybe i'm in love
maybe i'm in need
maybe i'm thinking of something
that just will never be
maybe i'm too low
maybe i'm too high
maybe i can't help it if
its you i wanna be with tonight
and i'm just standing in line
waiting for my turn
i'm just caught up in love
where i'm just too scared
And i'm thinking and i'm hurting ((yeah))
And i think i'm gonna go tonight
and i don't know how your feeling ((you say))
but everyone knows a way to get to me
And i'm thinking bout tomorrow ((yeah))
and your wondering bout everything else
and don't know how your feeling ((you say))
but everyone is thinking how low we can get
I don't need to know why
you can keep it to your self
i don't wanna know how
you can throw it all away
I'm just standing in line
waiting to run ahead
i'm just caught up in fighting
that i'm just too bare
And i'm thinking and i'm hurting ((yeah))
And i think i'm gonna go tonight
and i don't know how your feeling ((you say))
but everyone knows a way to get to me
And i'm thinking bout tomorrow ((yeah))
and your wondering bout everything else
and i don't know how your feeling ((you say))
but everyone is thinking how low we can get
I don't need to know why
you can't stop thinking bout her
i don't wanna know how
you can throw all that away
and i'm just standing in line
waiting for my turn
i'm just caught up in love
where i'm just too scared
And i'm thinking and i'm hurting ((yeah))
And i think i'm gonna go tonight
and i don't know how your feeling ((you say))
but everyone knows a way to get to me
And i'm thinking bout tomorrow ((yeah))
and your wondering bout everything else
and don't know how your feeling ((you say))
but everyone is thinking how low we can get
Maybe we should talk
or maybe we should scream
or maybe we'd feel better
if we would just leave
Maybe its a joke
or maybe its a stab
or maybe we'd be better off
if we just got back
and i'm standing in line
waiting for this time
i'm just caught in love
and none of you understand,
well maybe i'm in love
maybe i'm in need
maybe i'm thinking of something
that just will never be
maybe i'm too low
maybe i'm too high
maybe i can't help it if
its you i wanna be with tonight
and i'm just standing in line
waiting for my turn
i'm just caught up in love
where i'm just too scared
And i'm thinking and i'm hurting ((yeah))
And i think i'm gonna go tonight
and i don't know how your feeling ((you say))
but everyone knows a way to get to me
And i'm thinking bout tomorrow ((yeah))
and your wondering bout everything else
and don't know how your feeling ((you say))
but everyone is thinking how low we can get
Posted: 6/23/2003, 7:27 pm
Once again, I like it!
These sound like some solid songs. You need to start putting them to music and recording them.
These sound like some solid songs. You need to start putting them to music and recording them.
Posted: 6/23/2003, 7:31 pm
i'm puting lost of effort into the putting music to them... but i'm not good at guitar yet... and don't have much of a band... or any... of a band... but thanks Rob
Posted: 6/23/2003, 7:34 pm
Take your time with the music part. You've got some great lyrics, and in time you'll learn some more guitar and be able to easily put some cool stuff together.
Posted: 6/23/2003, 7:37 pm
I'm hoping so, my friends are rooting me on... i'm pumped. 
i'm hyper
i'm hyperPosted: 6/23/2003, 7:40 pm