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LIAM wrote:Your still here, waiting for me


"You're still here"

LIAM wrote:if its that your sorry for me


"if it's that you're sorry for me" or "if it is your sorry for me"

You are one gifted poet. Where do you get your inspiration?
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my inspiration either comes from my everday life, or something i read about, sometimes another song i heard, and sometimes a friend or something i heard on the CM, ya know something like that.
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Number 82:

March 16

Can you see the otherside of my, life
in the air, the space , and the stars
they all form their ways of beauty
and every one stares at them, again.
Remember when, we sat on the park bench
holing hands, and we were so alive
we said we'd never let the other go
and then you, got you call.

Will we ever make it,
through the shadows of our lives
cause inside we are shaking
shaking from the days.
but in the end, it all comes down
all of the peices break away,
and you got to put them back together
again.

Free bird, you hit the ground,
intregued by the minutes that go by
numbered the calender that night
i visited her, in her room
and she told me what to do, she said
thank you, for always being there
thank you, for loving me so
if i am to do what i'm due for
i want you to know, I love you forever

Will we ever make it,
through the shadows of our lives
cause inside we are shaking
shaking from the ways.
but in the end, it all comes down
all of the peices break away,
and you got to put them back together
again.

She knows, that i'm really scared right now
so through the last of her days,
we held hands just like we wanted to
I got a call, March 16th,

Will we ever make it,
through the shadows of our lives
cause inside we are shaking
shaking from the ways.
but in the end, it all comes down
all of the peices break away,
and you got to put them back together
again.

Will we ever make it,
through the shadows of our lives
cause inside we are shaking
shaking from the ways.
but in the end, it all comes down
all of the peices break away,
and you got to put them back together
again.
-Liam

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yeah it is very sad,
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since i can't come up with anything new to post (or write for that matter) i'm going to post something old, if i have already posted it before, just pretend i didnt...

here's number 33... i think

The Ways

Waking Up, All Alone
Getting In, Picking Up The Phone
Gripping It, The Frail Fire
Fall Asleep, I'm Stil So Tired

Everything And What It Wants
Disapointing In The Thoughts
I Just need To Clear My Head
Filter the words of what was said
Creeping Toward and to sleep
Shackled The Door To keep The, Days...
Disapointing Remembering The Ways

Letting In, All That Cold
Killing It, Is what I'm Told
helping Me, Won't Help At All
Awaiting It, The Telephone Call


Everything And What It Wants
Disapointing In The Thoughts
I Just need To Clear My Head
Filter the words of what was said
Creeping Toward and to sleep
Shackled The Door To keep The, Days...
Disapointing Remembering The Ways

My Feet Are Burning
My Head Is Tired
My Eyes Are Closing
The House Is On Fire

SOLO

My Feet Are Burning
My Head Is Tired
My Eyes Are Closing
The House Is On Fire

Everything And What It Wants
Disapointing In The Thoughts
I Just need To Clear My Head
Filter the words of what was said
Creeping Toward and to sleep
Shackled The Door To keep The...
Everything And What It Wants
Disapointing In The Thoughts
I Just need To Clear My Head
Filter the words of what was said
Creeping Toward and to sleep
Shackled The Door To keep The, Days...
Disapointing Remembering The Ways
(echo) Remembering The Ways
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I'm running out of compliments to give you.
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:lol: :lol:
-Liam

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LIAM wrote:Number 82:

March 16

Can you see the otherside of my, life
in the air, the space , and the stars
they all form their ways of beauty
and every one stares at them, again.
Remember when, we sat on the park bench
holing hands, and we were so alive
we said we'd never let the other go
and then you, got you call.

Will we ever make it,
through the shadows of our lives
cause inside we are shaking
shaking from the days.
but in the end, it all comes down
all of the peices break away,
and you got to put them back together
again.

Free bird, you hit the ground,
intregued by the minutes that go by
numbered the calender that night
i visited her, in her room
and she told me what to do, she said
thank you, for always being there
thank you, for loving me so
if i am to do what i'm due for
i want you to know, I love you forever

Will we ever make it,
through the shadows of our lives
cause inside we are shaking
shaking from the ways.
but in the end, it all comes down
all of the peices break away,
and you got to put them back together
again.

She knows, that i'm really scared right now
so through the last of her days,
we held hands just like we wanted to
I got a call, March 16th,

Will we ever make it,
through the shadows of our lives
cause inside we are shaking
shaking from the ways.
but in the end, it all comes down
all of the peices break away,
and you got to put them back together
again.

Will we ever make it,
through the shadows of our lives
cause inside we are shaking
shaking from the ways.
but in the end, it all comes down
all of the peices break away,
and you got to put them back together
again.


That reminds me of my favorite song of all time - "I Remember" by Stabbing Westward. Wow, that is really good though, thumbs up. :nod: - Megan
- megan.
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thanks
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The Newest, number 83:

Table Near The Stairs

your sitting on the ground
in the room full of chairs
you know you left your life
on the table near the stairs
Inside You are empty
And On the outside your the same
Everyone tried to protect you
and Keep you from the flame

When You are frightened
I want you come down
When you have no one left to go to
I will always be around
And when she said "i love you"
You said "I love you too"

Melt The Ice On The Fire
Mold Your Heart into a stone
"I hope your happy" or so you say
You wait until you hear the dial tone
Your number 1 friend
exploits a life time,with you
Jumping to conclusions
always makes it like it used to

When You are frightened
I want you come down
When you have no one left to go to
I will always be around
And when she said "i love you"
You said to her "I love you too"

Mining out your own answers
wondering how it got this way
And the last time you had been out
there was nothing left to say
She left her letter on the table
the table near the stairs
and she sealed it on that day
to wipe away her tears

When You are frightened
I want you come down
When you have no one left to go to
I will always be around
And when she said "i love you"
You said to her "I love you too"
And When she said "I love you"
You said to her "I love you too"
-Liam

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84:Rain Down

Releive yourself of my hate
just filth your mind
with everything youtake now
Maybe i have to begin
weave the pointlesness
the messege fate inside
kick aside the screams
make your move to right your wrong

Rain down on me
While I hide beneath
these city streets
Rain Down on me
While I hide inside
this restless night

While you give your hundred
million dollar just enough
hear my words of wisdom
Keep your head above
Hear the years the days
the months the weeks of rain
number the dreams you make
filling the hours to come

Rain down on me
While I hide beneath
these city streets
Rain Down on me
While I hide inside
this restless night

Give each side a try
another night inside
flying high on life
shot down by it too
throwing money
from your pocket
just an evil dancing day
can't you see my life is never way

Rain down on me
While I hide beneath
these city streets
Rain Down on me
While I hide inside
this restless night

Leave the right behind you
it always brought you down
keep up the retrieval
never meant much to you

Rain down on me
While I hide beneath
these city streets
Rain Down on me
While I hide inside
this restless night

Rain down on me
While I hide beneath
these city streets
Rain Down on me
While I hide inside
this restless night
-Liam

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LIAM wrote:"I hope your happy" or so you say


"I hope you're happy"

Otherwise both 83 and 84 are very nice. :nod:
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thanks
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I have a god damn creative block so any of you who'd like to just say something to me anything... please do it... i need something to write about.
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Say something? Anything?

The closet in the basement is where I keep my soul, for when I need it most.

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And though the hum and sway gets me down
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^^ thanks.... that may help it could be put into a lyric though it may turn into one of those wtf lyrics in the throw away the radio...
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lol. I hope that somehow actually helps. :mrgreen:
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me too...
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91:

He never acted this way before
and no one knew the truth, no open door
he never began to give me "real"
but no one noticed when his lips were sealed

Underneath that deep sensation
is another concentration
reliving the pain and all that was wrong
it must have been bad cause its been so long

I've been waiting here
for a thousand years
i've been waiting for you
i've been waiting for something so true

And as she turned her head
to walk out that door
he had just given her just one more

She had a lifelong best friend
she hadn't seen him in a long ten
she went to him with her open arms
and he let her in with his charm

And he used to love her so
she didn't want him and just let him go
reliving the pain and all that was wrong
it must have been bad cause its been so long

I've been waiting here
for a thousand years
i've been waiting for you
i've been waiting for something so true

And as she turned her head
to walk out that door
he had just given her just one more

She ended up living with her friend
and the story was never braught up again
and they're getting married next week
and they'll be never with love to seek

Underneath that deep sensation
is another concentration
reliving the pain and all that was wrong
it must have been bad cause its been so long

I've been waiting here
for a thousand years
i've been waiting for you
i've been waiting for something so true

And as she turned her head
to walk out that door
he had just given her just one more
-Liam

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