Liam's New Song

Penguin Josh · Post by **Penguin Josh** » 2/22/2003, 2:48 pm

not bad

liam · Post by **liam** » 2/22/2003, 2:49 pm

thanks... I've been waiting two days for someone to reply...

Penguin Josh · Post by **Penguin Josh** » 2/22/2003, 2:50 pm

sign onto aim

liam · Post by **liam** » 2/22/2003, 2:51 pm

i am,

liam · Post by **liam** » 2/26/2003, 4:20 pm

This is the real number 113, its kind of poppy but not too popppy its like BTE-Closer CD poppy...

113:Running

And I see you and I'm still sorry,
for what we never had
And i'm still hoping that i can wake up
and nothing will be bad
But I know nothing ever changes
or atleast not to me
but i can assure you that I have woken up
but i can't say it was lately

Cause I've been running, running down the line
looking back, looking back on through time
I'm running, running down the line
staring the end in the face but i can't find it, find it
I'm running, running down the line
staring the end in the face and i don't know why
And I'm running, i'm still running, down the line
staring the end in the face and i'm crying, and i'm dying inside

And i'm hoping and i'm dreamin
that i'll open up my eyes
I open the door to see you on the steps
what a surprise
But I know that can't win this fight
because i left
Just to see you though
you know the prize is kept

Cause I've been running, running down the line
looking back, looking back on through time
I'm running, running down the line
staring the end in the face but i can't find it, find it
I'm running, running down the line
staring the end in the face and i don't know why
And I'm running, i'm still running, down the line
staring the end in the face and i'm crying, and i'm dying inside

And I see you and I'm still sorry,
for the days we should have had
If i could go backwards in time
nothing would be bad
Cause... I still see you and i'm sorry
for what could have come
If i could have chosen again
you know I would have chosen to stay

Cause I've been running, running down the line
looking back, looking back on through time
I'm running, running down the line
staring the end in the face but i can't find it, find it
I'm running, running down the line
staring the end in the face and i don't know why
And I'm running, i'm still running, down the line
staring the end in the face and i'm crying, and i'm dying inside

Cause I've been running, running down the line
looking back, looking back on through time
I'm running, running down the line
staring the end in the face but i can't find it, find it
I'm running, running down the line
staring the end in the face and i don't know why
And I'm running, i'm still running, down the line
Still looking back in time, still looking back at you
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114:Black On Both Sides

Pointless Piper, the City of angels
nothing loves me, i love nothing
I don't care for you, as long as i whisper
I have life, I have life

I believe, I have dawn So I
I don't care, cause I, I have hope
AND SO I...

So when you come down, to see my face for
everything it screams, screaming everything
The painful calls, meaningless souls
I can't hate you, I Hate nothing and

I believe, I have dawn So I
I don't care, cause I, I have hope
AND SO I, I break out, into a thousand
peices of stone, black on both sides
And So I...

I Don't Care,
I Don't Love,
SO I, I Don't Care,
I Don't Love,
AND SO I...

And So I
I believe, I have dawn So I
I don't care, cause I, I have hope
AND SO I, I break out, into a thousand
peices of stone, black on both sides
Black on Both Sides, Black On Both Sides
Black on Both Sides.
And So I Die.

emily · Post by **emily** » 2/26/2003, 5:13 pm

bravo... except i don't really like the "and so i die"

just seems to dramatic

happening fish · Post by **happening fish** » 2/26/2003, 5:46 pm

^agreed, and also i think the first one should be called Down The Line

but very nice :nod:

liam · Post by **liam** » 2/26/2003, 5:51 pm

wow, thanks. To tell you the truth i didn't realize i posted both songs... stupid Liam, and thanks for the suggestions.

liam · Post by **liam** » 3/15/2003, 9:47 am

yeah and i changed the end to black on both sides to just "and so i" it really does seem better

liam · Post by **liam** » 3/15/2003, 9:48 am

Please make me happy and read all of these, Liam needs some criticism, and all you spelling nazis i doin't care whats spelled wrong, unless its one hell of a mistake... thank you all... (sorry spelling nazis)

120:Incoherent Melodies

Can't you believe how much we all thought?
Can you even think at all?
I could have helped you out to begin with
You could have been anyone else

I will watch you
regret them all
I will watch you
and then you will fall

I believe i can hear it in my way
I believe its still so far away
These incoherent memory melodies
are all i still have and they fade

I can't stand how much we hear laughter
Can you even laugh at all?
I could have put you anywhere you wanted
You could have been anywhere else

I will watch you
regret them all
I will watch you
and then you will fall

I believe i can hear it in my way
I believe its still so far away
These incoherent memory melodies
are all i have and they fade

And look at us
And look at them
And Look at us
And look at what we stand for
And Look at them
And look at who they are

And I will watch you
I will watch you regret them all
And I will watch you
I will watch you until you fall

And I will watch you
And i will watch you-
And I will watch you
And I will watch you-

I believe i can hear it in my way
I believe its still so far away
These incoherent memory melodies
are all i have and they fade

and i'll watch you
and i'll watch you
and i'll watch you
and i'll watch you
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121: Dead, in other words

My Discretion far away
My arms wrapped around you like a disease
And through the windows Comes one giant Flame
Rollercoaster falling, falling, and still

A lanterne 20 stories tall
A tradgety to anyone and me
A look down I may have heard a voice
"Darkness Bring Me To My Knees"

I tried to talk him down to cope
"Where man, can i find some hope"
"Not here," he spoke the words
"Not here," a collage of broken hurt

I held on, one more ledge to break
I swear I felt something pushin me down
The metal letting Loose
What More could I do?

A break in the scene,
i got my coffee and my side of things
I'm still holding on for one more
Push me again, i can't take for sure

A lanterne 20 stories tall
A tradgety to anyone and me
A look down I may have heard a voice
"Darkness Bring Me To My Knees"

I tried to talk him down to cope
"Where man, can i find some hope?"
"Not here," he spoke the words
"Not here," a collage of broken hurt

Is This a message?
Is this a nursery rhyme?
Is This a collective way to survive?

Is this a message?
Is this a nursery rhyme?
How many really have to die?
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122: Look!

Wanna be myself for a while
i'm sinking into the new machine
Look at you just standing there
Look at you just standing scared

Look at me in the mirror
Stare at me in the eyes
one more earthquake to bring me down
one more weight to pile the crowd

Another day of falling to my knees
another day of failing to my needs
one more way of staying found
one more way of being around

just so scared
so scared

Another day to contemplate
breaking rules to the end
Look at you for who you are
Look at you for what you aren't

Look at me in the mirror
Stare at me in the eyes
one more earthquake to bring me down
one more weight to pile the crowd

Another day of falling to my knees
another day of failing to my needs
one more way of staying found
one more way of being around

Another minutes passes
and i have never seen you before
Bring darkness to the sky
bring meaning to to my life

Look at me in the mirror
Stare at me in the eyes
one more earthquake to bring me down
one more weight to pile the crowd

Another day of falling to my knees
another day of failing to my needs
one more way of staying found
one more way of being around

I'm just scared
so scared
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123: August Leaves

Dread soul impossible to short
mumblings of love hurt so honestly
And i can't wait, and I can't stay here tonight
because anything that moves is anything that dies

And i'm not, your august leaves
so brace yourself, your mere hipocracy
Look at my soul, you may see yourself
Your tearing it apart, your taking whats left
And I'm still here tonight waiting to die
and i won't stay much longer for anyone
and i'm a waste, a double melody
a distasteful rain, a distasteful reign

And ohh...
Ohhh ohhh ohh...

Maybe its still here
those encouraged lands, bleed so carefully
And I won't feel, its impossible to hate
but sences come in and kill any "spite" hope

And i'm not, your august leaves
so brace yourself, your mere hipocracy
Look at my soul, you may see yourself
Your tearing it apart, your taking whats left
And I'm still here tonight waiting to die
and i won't stay much longer for anyone
and i'm a waste, a double melody
a distasteful rain, a distasteful reign

Stand here, brace yourself a while
in demand, in demand
Stand here, indulge in my hate for a while

Stand here, stab me again
I'll bleed some more, i'll bleed some more
Stand here, shed some memory
I'm bleeding here, I'm bleeding tears
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happening fish · Post by **happening fish** » 3/15/2003, 12:42 pm

no complaints from me, you spelled incoherent right and i'm highyl impressed by that.

liam · Post by **liam** » 3/15/2003, 1:18 pm

Neil · Post by **Neil** » 3/15/2003, 2:53 pm

kick ass Liam...

liam · Post by **liam** » 3/18/2003, 4:25 pm

thank you

liam · Post by **liam** » 5/12/2003, 7:24 pm

Some of Liam's New Songs===

124: One Thousand Insomniacs

And I walk in
and i sit down
In the middle of somewhere
Nowhere to be found

And I'm Telling a story
To one thousand insomniacs
And I'm reaching the glory
with one thousand regrets

And your diggin a hole
And I feel the same way
And Your Singin Your Soul
And I can't wait to be ashamed

I'm handing out fliers
to a ballroom that doesnt exist
And I never thought
Being no one would be something like this

And I'm Telling A Story
To one thousand insomniacs
ANd I'm Reaching The Glory
With one thousand regrets

And Your soothing me with hate
And I Feel like pure nothingness
And your making me wait
For something thats nothing less

And I'm telling a story
to one thousand insmoniacs
And I'm reaching the glory
with no one else to react

And I'm telling a story
to one thousand insomniacs
No ones paying attension
but someone must react.
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125: Now, And Forever

Repeat, the precautions of yesterday
No one lives, so no one dies that way
(its over)
No guns, immortality
Our lives, no reality

Its Just Begun, The Ending waits
its now or nothing in the undying day
Our Relevance is nothing now

Its Just Begun, the ending waits
Realize theres no 'nother day
Our Lives are Irrelevant

Relive, the encounters of yesterday
No one dies, so no one lives that way
(its over)
No death, a fatality
No Pain, no reality

Its Just Begun, The Ending waits
its now or nothing in the undying day
Our Relevance is nothing now

Its Just Begun, the ending waits
Realize theres no 'nother day
Our Lives are Irrelevant

And I'm coming break you
And I'm waiting to hate you
And theres one less reason
To live forever....

Overcrowded, streets on a holiday
Overloved, the same people of yesterday
In the mirror, you look at yourself
in ten thousand years wouldn't help.

Its Just Begun, The Ending waits
its now or nothing in the undying day
Our Relevance is nothing now

Its Just Begun, the ending waits
Realize theres no 'nother day
Our Lives are Irrelevant

clumsychild_ · Post by **clumsychild_** » 5/14/2003, 1:53 pm

excellent

liam · Post by **liam** » 5/14/2003, 1:54 pm

thank you clumsy child... or Jess... Thanks

Johnny · Post by **Johnny** » 5/14/2003, 1:59 pm

Learm to play guitar and maybe some day you can be a famous rocker

Good writting by the way

liam · Post by **liam** » 5/14/2003, 2:00 pm

126: Solute to the Nation

Unloved
another soul beneath the skin
Untried
one more hole in the wind

I'll try to fill the shoes
I'll try to fill the shoes

No wait
no line or seating for this show
no hate
i'll bring it back as if it weren't away

I'll try to fill the shoes
I'll try to fill the shoes

And no ones listening
And everyones hearing me
And I, I can't find meaning

And no one's waiting here
and everyones left me
And I, I can't remember why

Remind
acute ocupation for food
Resigned
a solute to the nation

I'll try to fill the shoes
I'll try to fill the shoes

ANd no ones LISTENING
and everyones HEARING ME
ANd I, I can't find meaning

ANd no one's waiting here
and everone's left me
And I, I can't remember why

Watch it,
Fly over us,
Watch over us,
Suceed in the night,
abuseless tonight,

Another eternity
Another comformady
Another conscience (I'll try to fill the shoes)
Another Chance (I'll try to fill the shoes)

And no one's LISTENING
and everyones HEARING ME
and I, I can't find meanings

and no one's waiting here
and everyone's left me
and i, i can't remember why

Neil · Post by **Neil** » 5/14/2003, 4:16 pm

Liam, u ever gonna preform these songs yourself 'ur you gonna be one of those famous writers that writes all the songs for the tools that just aren't as good as you?

*cough* Britney Spears, Celine Deon