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Postby .::v0kaledGe::. » 1/27/2003, 5:36 pm

:larry: oh god no.
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Postby christa lynn » 1/27/2003, 6:01 pm

Possible thesis statement type dealio:

"I believe that cloning is wrong because of the possible health problems often found in clones, physically, mentally and emotionally; and because of the risk to the serogate mothers of the clones."

. . . . or some such thing. Put it in your own words.

Also, reduce that statistic or serogate mothers to 1/3, it sounds better than 4/12. :nod:

I thought it was very good for grade 7 as well.
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Postby .::v0kaledGe::. » 1/27/2003, 6:15 pm

:D Thanks guys. But the trouble is see, that we had an outline we had to form before writing the entire draft of an essay. There was a Thesis, 2 Reasons, Explanation of Why You Feel This Way and Proof to Back It Up. I chose "Mental & Emotional Risks to the cloned beings" and "Lack of genetic diversity in the gene pool." My first reason is quite large as I got a lot of proof so I decided to split it up into two reasons. The health one, being the lost lives and the other being the mental & emotional damage to the cloned beings that do survive. So, I "conferenced" with the teacher and, being the stubborn person that she is, wouldn't even listen to what I was saying and told me to go back to the drawing board and re-write it using the basic formula in the outline. Stupid teacher. Here's my revised version I haven't finished yet, coming up.
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Postby lora » 1/27/2003, 6:21 pm

so much for teachers trying to expand the depths of imagination and creativity...
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Postby Mechanical Thought » 1/27/2003, 6:27 pm

my teachers have all been pretty godd that way.
its my class that sucks. a majority of them are so stupid that they have no idea what i'm talking about, let alone understand what i mean. its sad, but true.

Without you I'm as good as
dead ...
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Postby .::v0kaledGe::. » 1/28/2003, 6:50 pm

i truly am in love
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Postby emily » 1/28/2003, 6:54 pm

with your teacher?
!EMiLY!

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Postby Gimme_Shelter » 1/28/2003, 8:39 pm

im in love with their teacher also
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Postby Axtech » 1/29/2003, 8:03 am

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Postby megxyz128 » 1/29/2003, 3:29 pm

I thought it was a Rolling Stones reference?
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