that sad.
I really don't know what else to say. Your a phenominal writer, and are able to convay emotions and messages through your devices, and I wish I could write like you do. I wish I could just show you that you can look ahead to the changing future and be right back up with the stars again. But thats not as easy as it sounds, is it?
Great writing.
a broken hearted diatribe
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a broken hearted diatribe
by trentm32 » 9/2/2004, 8:17 pm
"When looking up there, I just felt whole, like I belonged. Like one day I too would shine my most brilliant. Sitting there also made me think about sitting through services at my little country church back home. About that never-changing congregation of the same sixty-seven people and everyone has known you since before you were born. Now, out here in the real world, everything just seemed more vivid than when I used to sit in that little pew. That pew that was now so, so far away from where I was. I feared I had somehow left God behind there, too. I feared he was somehow just sitting there, saving my seat on the fifth pew from the front row, just waiting on me to come back. I left so quickly, I worried that he may not have noticed I was gone. And, now, I’m just too far away to find. So he’s just sitting there, patiently waiting on me to come back. I closed my eyes and prayed a moment. I hoped more than anything that he could still hear me." -an excerpt from my novella, A Sea of Fallen Leaves.
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by starseed_10 » 9/2/2004, 8:38 pm
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by trentm32 » 9/2/2004, 8:41 pm
thanks ya; thank ya muchly.
"When looking up there, I just felt whole, like I belonged. Like one day I too would shine my most brilliant. Sitting there also made me think about sitting through services at my little country church back home. About that never-changing congregation of the same sixty-seven people and everyone has known you since before you were born. Now, out here in the real world, everything just seemed more vivid than when I used to sit in that little pew. That pew that was now so, so far away from where I was. I feared I had somehow left God behind there, too. I feared he was somehow just sitting there, saving my seat on the fifth pew from the front row, just waiting on me to come back. I left so quickly, I worried that he may not have noticed I was gone. And, now, I’m just too far away to find. So he’s just sitting there, patiently waiting on me to come back. I closed my eyes and prayed a moment. I hoped more than anything that he could still hear me." -an excerpt from my novella, A Sea of Fallen Leaves.
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by Rusty » 9/2/2004, 8:57 pm
Queens Of The Stone Age-Someone's In The Wolf
Once you're lost in twillights's blue
You don't find your way, the way finds you...
Tempt the fates, beware the smile
It hides all the teeth, my dear,
What's behind them...
So glad you could stay
Forever
He steps between the trees, a crooked man
There's blood on the blade
Don't take his hand
You warm by the firelight, in twilight's blue
Shadows creep & dance the walls
He's creeping too..
So glad you could stay
Forever
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by trentm32 » 9/2/2004, 8:57 pm
"When looking up there, I just felt whole, like I belonged. Like one day I too would shine my most brilliant. Sitting there also made me think about sitting through services at my little country church back home. About that never-changing congregation of the same sixty-seven people and everyone has known you since before you were born. Now, out here in the real world, everything just seemed more vivid than when I used to sit in that little pew. That pew that was now so, so far away from where I was. I feared I had somehow left God behind there, too. I feared he was somehow just sitting there, saving my seat on the fifth pew from the front row, just waiting on me to come back. I left so quickly, I worried that he may not have noticed I was gone. And, now, I’m just too far away to find. So he’s just sitting there, patiently waiting on me to come back. I closed my eyes and prayed a moment. I hoped more than anything that he could still hear me." -an excerpt from my novella, A Sea of Fallen Leaves.
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by Rusty » 9/2/2004, 9:05 pm
Queens Of The Stone Age-Someone's In The Wolf
Once you're lost in twillights's blue
You don't find your way, the way finds you...
Tempt the fates, beware the smile
It hides all the teeth, my dear,
What's behind them...
So glad you could stay
Forever
He steps between the trees, a crooked man
There's blood on the blade
Don't take his hand
You warm by the firelight, in twilight's blue
Shadows creep & dance the walls
He's creeping too..
So glad you could stay
Forever
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by trentm32 » 9/2/2004, 9:07 pm
yep. it sucks. it wouldn't be so bad if I didn't have to see them, you know. Together, all the time. In some ways, I wish I could just cut them out of my life; as emotionally unhealthy as that sounds.
"When looking up there, I just felt whole, like I belonged. Like one day I too would shine my most brilliant. Sitting there also made me think about sitting through services at my little country church back home. About that never-changing congregation of the same sixty-seven people and everyone has known you since before you were born. Now, out here in the real world, everything just seemed more vivid than when I used to sit in that little pew. That pew that was now so, so far away from where I was. I feared I had somehow left God behind there, too. I feared he was somehow just sitting there, saving my seat on the fifth pew from the front row, just waiting on me to come back. I left so quickly, I worried that he may not have noticed I was gone. And, now, I’m just too far away to find. So he’s just sitting there, patiently waiting on me to come back. I closed my eyes and prayed a moment. I hoped more than anything that he could still hear me." -an excerpt from my novella, A Sea of Fallen Leaves.
<a href="http://www.soundthesirens.com">SoundTheSirens.com</a>
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by Random Name » 9/2/2004, 9:11 pm
I totally know that feeling. When life moves on when you don't want it to. And you wonder what the hell happened to make things go completly astray.
Actually a little while ago I decided that I was going to stop writing in my journal. I had a written journal and an online blog that I wrote in. Exactally 2 years from when I started writing I stopped. I took all my blog entries (I printed all 127 of them
) and put them all together in order in a binder and I haven't written since. Now I feel a lot more emotionally healthy. I think before, my way to deal was to write it out and that just made me dwell on things. Now I don't so much anymore and I think I'm better for it. No regrets though.
Anyway, I am not in any way trying to say that you should stop writing because that is obviously a passion of your and your very talented. But maybe a way to deal with changes you don't want is to make changes in you. if that makes any sense. Maybe I'm just rambling on, but the past is just that. And while it would be really fantastic to feel that same bond with those people again, maybe it's just not ment to be. And insted of thinking how you wish it could be like that again, you have to embrace what you had as being a good thing and then look at the good things in your life now. Pain is the best insparation to draw from since everyone feels it and its in every day life, but you can't live life like that.
Anyway, I'm going all Dr. Phil here. So yeah, I hope things work out with your friends and your brother. I've had enough family troubles to see where the whole lack of connection thing plays in. But don't hold it against him for feeling the same way you do.
Actually a little while ago I decided that I was going to stop writing in my journal. I had a written journal and an online blog that I wrote in. Exactally 2 years from when I started writing I stopped. I took all my blog entries (I printed all 127 of them
) and put them all together in order in a binder and I haven't written since. Now I feel a lot more emotionally healthy. I think before, my way to deal was to write it out and that just made me dwell on things. Now I don't so much anymore and I think I'm better for it. No regrets though.
Anyway, I am not in any way trying to say that you should stop writing because that is obviously a passion of your and your very talented. But maybe a way to deal with changes you don't want is to make changes in you. if that makes any sense. Maybe I'm just rambling on, but the past is just that. And while it would be really fantastic to feel that same bond with those people again, maybe it's just not ment to be. And insted of thinking how you wish it could be like that again, you have to embrace what you had as being a good thing and then look at the good things in your life now. Pain is the best insparation to draw from since everyone feels it and its in every day life, but you can't live life like that.
Anyway, I'm going all Dr. Phil here. So yeah, I hope things work out with your friends and your brother. I've had enough family troubles to see where the whole lack of connection thing plays in. But don't hold it against him for feeling the same way you do.
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by Rusty » 9/2/2004, 9:14 pm
Yeah I know what you mean. You'll find someone else sooner or later though.
Queens Of The Stone Age-Someone's In The Wolf
Once you're lost in twillights's blue
You don't find your way, the way finds you...
Tempt the fates, beware the smile
It hides all the teeth, my dear,
What's behind them...
So glad you could stay
Forever
He steps between the trees, a crooked man
There's blood on the blade
Don't take his hand
You warm by the firelight, in twilight's blue
Shadows creep & dance the walls
He's creeping too..
So glad you could stay
Forever
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by trentm32 » 9/2/2004, 9:18 pm
"When looking up there, I just felt whole, like I belonged. Like one day I too would shine my most brilliant. Sitting there also made me think about sitting through services at my little country church back home. About that never-changing congregation of the same sixty-seven people and everyone has known you since before you were born. Now, out here in the real world, everything just seemed more vivid than when I used to sit in that little pew. That pew that was now so, so far away from where I was. I feared I had somehow left God behind there, too. I feared he was somehow just sitting there, saving my seat on the fifth pew from the front row, just waiting on me to come back. I left so quickly, I worried that he may not have noticed I was gone. And, now, I’m just too far away to find. So he’s just sitting there, patiently waiting on me to come back. I closed my eyes and prayed a moment. I hoped more than anything that he could still hear me." -an excerpt from my novella, A Sea of Fallen Leaves.
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by christa lynn » 9/3/2004, 1:12 pm
*hugs*
That's an awesome bit of prose. My one complaint is that the first word "Sometime" should be "Sometimes" but I bet that's a typo anyway.
That's an awesome bit of prose. My one complaint is that the first word "Sometime" should be "Sometimes" but I bet that's a typo anyway.
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by trentm32 » 9/15/2004, 4:55 pm
"lingered glances and sad eyes"
so many hearts broken,
wreckage on the way
of getting to this nowhere,
where no one wants to stay
friends before it started,
in the end it's not so sound
myself the hapless commentary,
watching the walls crash down
the secrets known by all,
but happy smiles fill the faces
lingered glances and sad eyes,
below the surface of these places
it isn't fair that pain unwarranted,
will always find the softest heart
my God I fear it's jading,
only wanting a happy part
here's a new poem I wrote a minute ago (first in a while, actually).
I put it in this thread because this one is the best to explain where the inspiration came from. My bro and the girl are breaking up, and the girl and I are still good friends, so I'm gonna have to console her wanting of my brother; myself being nuts over her. I wrote this about my view of the situation, and her.
so many hearts broken,
wreckage on the way
of getting to this nowhere,
where no one wants to stay
friends before it started,
in the end it's not so sound
myself the hapless commentary,
watching the walls crash down
the secrets known by all,
but happy smiles fill the faces
lingered glances and sad eyes,
below the surface of these places
it isn't fair that pain unwarranted,
will always find the softest heart
my God I fear it's jading,
only wanting a happy part
here's a new poem I wrote a minute ago (first in a while, actually).
I put it in this thread because this one is the best to explain where the inspiration came from. My bro and the girl are breaking up, and the girl and I are still good friends, so I'm gonna have to console her wanting of my brother; myself being nuts over her. I wrote this about my view of the situation, and her.
"When looking up there, I just felt whole, like I belonged. Like one day I too would shine my most brilliant. Sitting there also made me think about sitting through services at my little country church back home. About that never-changing congregation of the same sixty-seven people and everyone has known you since before you were born. Now, out here in the real world, everything just seemed more vivid than when I used to sit in that little pew. That pew that was now so, so far away from where I was. I feared I had somehow left God behind there, too. I feared he was somehow just sitting there, saving my seat on the fifth pew from the front row, just waiting on me to come back. I left so quickly, I worried that he may not have noticed I was gone. And, now, I’m just too far away to find. So he’s just sitting there, patiently waiting on me to come back. I closed my eyes and prayed a moment. I hoped more than anything that he could still hear me." -an excerpt from my novella, A Sea of Fallen Leaves.
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