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deluge. [shamefully broken]

Postby happening fish » 4/13/2003, 10:33 am

edited long after this thread's creation:
most of this is crap. i'm optimistically venturing forth the idea that it improves as it goes on, but that's probably hopeful delusion.



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i'm losing my tenuous grip
on the calm center core
that's keeping me sane
i've been trying so hard not to trip
on the hate that i feel
when nothing feels real

i'm being pushed towards the ledge
the hands on my back
speak of falsified love
about to lose myself over the edge
and who'll help me now
when i'm hurtling down?

every word i heard grates on my soul
until i just feel like killing them all
if i'm happy it seems like they aren't
so buried in hate and forgotten...
Last edited by happening fish on 10/18/2005, 11:16 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby Axtech » 4/13/2003, 11:17 am

Very nice! :nod: :love:
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Postby sandsleeper » 4/13/2003, 11:59 am

i think i know that feeling...
Lick a finger: feel the now.
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Postby happening fish » 4/13/2003, 2:23 pm

...i spoke to you of life
and you told me i was special
but you didn't say how
why should i believe you now?
and if i had a knife
and i welcomed the devil
would it take me away?
there's so much i could say
but i'm nothing at all
nothing at all.
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Postby happening fish » 4/13/2003, 6:02 pm

a million directions and i've yet to find one
that doesn't lead back to you
a million transgressions and there isn't a one
that i haven't imposed on you
there are a million stars in the universe
but there's only one in mine
and you move like the ocean
and you love like the sun
and leave a million memories behind
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Postby Axtech » 4/13/2003, 6:04 pm

That one is amazing!
- Robert Marshall -
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And though the hum and sway gets me down
, I'll find the way to peace and openness.

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Postby happening fish » 4/13/2003, 6:04 pm

:)
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Postby Susan » 4/13/2003, 8:00 pm

Holy fucking fantasic :D
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Postby happening fish » 4/13/2003, 8:37 pm

can't concentrate on anything
when my eyes have so much excuse to wander
you're always lurking, like a fishnet
waiting to tear my thoughts asunder
couldn't live with it if i told
and yet i can't live without you
a war is raging and its fires aren't going out

so stay a while by me
don't lift your green eyes from me
the world is bland without your emerald stare
so linger a little longer
amuse me while I wonder
how the world could be so damn unfair
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Postby lora » 4/14/2003, 12:51 pm

alex, as always, your poetry moves me. very nice work.
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Postby starseed_10 » 4/14/2003, 1:58 pm

how are you so good at this? basically everything i've attempted sucks so far. I'm so Englishly challanged.
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Postby superboots » 4/14/2003, 3:58 pm

happeninfish wrote:can't concentrate on anything
when my eyes have so much excuse to wander
you're always lurking, like a fishnet
waiting to tear my thoughts asunder
couldn't live with it if i told
and yet i can't live without you
a war is raging and its fires aren't going out

so stay a while by me
don't lift your green eyes from me
the world is bland without your emerald stare
so linger a little longer
amuse me while I wonder
how the world could be so damn unfair


green eyes.

heh :mrgreen:

brilliant. simply brilliant
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OMG. I can't believe I din't think fo you
until now because when I think on
a scale of one to ten you're like YWELVE.
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Postby Axtech » 4/14/2003, 3:58 pm

Forget what?

Oh, wait, I remember.
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Postby superboots » 4/14/2003, 3:59 pm

Alex writes my papers for me.

hehe. :mrgreen:
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OMG. I can't believe I din't think fo you
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Postby happening fish » 4/15/2003, 4:25 pm

heh, not exactly, Beth :P


the word just came
today the future's real
counting the seconds to you

the broken lines
the glass to my hot steel
destiny has come crashing through
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Postby Axtech » 4/15/2003, 4:43 pm

It's not fair that you can write that well...
- Robert Marshall -
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And though the hum and sway gets me down
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Postby happening fish » 4/15/2003, 4:57 pm

you're so silly, Robbo. I wrote that in the middle of french class, it took me like 3 seconds. it's just a couple scribbled lines :lol:
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Postby Axtech » 4/15/2003, 4:58 pm

And the fact that you can do it so easily makes it even more unfair!
- Robert Marshall -
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And though the hum and sway gets me down
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Postby happening fish » 4/15/2003, 7:38 pm

:roll:

Prone before the light, I pray
Though the God I seek has little care
Hopeless am I, as I kneel and sway
That my words are more than wasted air

But why, then, does the tilting Earth
With silent field and watchful beast
Demand, insist, to know my worth
When I am worth the least?
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Postby Axtech » 4/15/2003, 7:59 pm

Your greatness blinds me
In a way you'll never know
All-encompassing
Poetic from head to toe

:)
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Every now and then I fall out into open air just to feel the wind, rain and everything.
And though the hum and sway gets me down
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