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by **happening fish** » 4/13/2003, 10:33 am

edited long after this thread's creation:
most of this is crap. i'm optimistically venturing forth the idea that it improves as it goes on, but that's probably hopeful delusion.

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i'm losing my tenuous grip
on the calm center core
that's keeping me sane
i've been trying so hard not to trip
on the hate that i feel
when nothing feels real

i'm being pushed towards the ledge
the hands on my back
speak of falsified love
about to lose myself over the edge
and who'll help me now
when i'm hurtling down?

every word i heard grates on my soul
until i just feel like killing them all
if i'm happy it seems like they aren't
so buried in hate and forgotten...

by **Axtech** » 4/13/2003, 11:17 am

by **sandsleeper** » 4/13/2003, 11:59 am

i think i know that feeling...

by **happening fish** » 4/13/2003, 2:23 pm

by **happening fish** » 4/13/2003, 6:02 pm

a million directions and i've yet to find one
that doesn't lead back to you
a million transgressions and there isn't a one
that i haven't imposed on you
there are a million stars in the universe
but there's only one in mine
and you move like the ocean
and you love like the sun
and leave a million memories behind

by **Axtech** » 4/13/2003, 6:04 pm

That one is amazing!

by **happening fish** » 4/13/2003, 6:04 pm

by **Susan** » 4/13/2003, 8:00 pm

by **happening fish** » 4/13/2003, 8:37 pm

by **lora** » 4/14/2003, 12:51 pm

alex, as always, your poetry moves me. very nice work.

by **starseed_10** » 4/14/2003, 1:58 pm

by **superboots** » 4/14/2003, 3:58 pm

by **Axtech** » 4/14/2003, 3:58 pm

by **superboots** » 4/14/2003, 3:59 pm

by **happening fish** » 4/15/2003, 4:25 pm

heh, not exactly, Beth

the word just came
today the future's real
counting the seconds to you

the broken lines
the glass to my hot steel
destiny has come crashing through

by **Axtech** » 4/15/2003, 4:43 pm

by **happening fish** » 4/15/2003, 4:57 pm

you're so silly, Robbo. I wrote that in the middle of french class, it took me like 3 seconds. it's just a couple scribbled lines :lol:

by **Axtech** » 4/15/2003, 4:58 pm

And the fact that you can do it so easily makes it even more unfair!

by **happening fish** » 4/15/2003, 7:38 pm

by **Axtech** » 4/15/2003, 7:59 pm

Your greatness blinds me
In a way you'll never know
All-encompassing
Poetic from head to toe

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