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Postby ChristineKey » 7/20/2005, 3:15 pm

Whenever Dylan when anywhere people look at him odd it wasn't because he was ugly or handsome which he is, he looked normal until you look at him for few minutes then you can tell that something was off about him not in crazy way he dress normal too, then that led to people stay away or coming up to him. Dylan never notice the way people look at him, it just that he always been different and Dylan knew he was it was not a big deal for him it was normal but what is normal he thought about that alot. It’s because people tell him that he always somewhere else. He’s not on med's. He not crazy just that everything inside of him is mess up things that you can't fix it's too complicated even for the doctors but Dylan has no real disorder, it just how god made him, god never makes mistakes but people do. He wish that people let him be. Once in blue moon he wonders what it would be to be like other people or even to have other people understand him, it’s tough having a mind of a genius but to have a very low emotional I.Q it's not that he does care about people he does not show it that well, when he does go out with people he play extreme sports, the others sports does not stimulate him in a way he needs that’s another problem but sometime it opposite he has to do noting that all his body can handle, there just lots of little things that bug him. He could become professor of mathematics it's even how he thinks but he knows he can't for one simple reason that he won't be able handle school it's too perplexed for him. It's bad for his heath. He is an successful artist that is his other talent he loves it helps gets his emotion out, he married to another artist that helps keep him sane not alot of things means something to him but she does and to have freedom does because he spent long time in the hospital when he was a child, it was much worse then. Now his life is good, that all he wants.
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Postby trentm32 » 7/21/2005, 12:23 pm

I dig it!; seems kinda like a character sketch for a larger piece, though...
"When looking up there, I just felt whole, like I belonged. Like one day I too would shine my most brilliant. Sitting there also made me think about sitting through services at my little country church back home. About that never-changing congregation of the same sixty-seven people and everyone has known you since before you were born. Now, out here in the real world, everything just seemed more vivid than when I used to sit in that little pew. That pew that was now so, so far away from where I was. I feared I had somehow left God behind there, too. I feared he was somehow just sitting there, saving my seat on the fifth pew from the front row, just waiting on me to come back. I left so quickly, I worried that he may not have noticed I was gone. And, now, I’m just too far away to find. So he’s just sitting there, patiently waiting on me to come back. I closed my eyes and prayed a moment. I hoped more than anything that he could still hear me." -an excerpt from my novella, A Sea of Fallen Leaves.

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Postby Corey » 7/21/2005, 3:13 pm

I think you need to proof read.
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Postby ChristineKey » 7/21/2005, 3:50 pm

Yeah, it's sort of from a character sketch from a novel that I've been writing forever but I made few changes, cause I needed a break. It's really roughly done. It just took five minutes to do, I did it two days ago and I thought what the heck I'II post it. Kinda been in a weird posting mood you know I usually just basically lurk.

Yes I need a poof read, I am really horrible at that. but I am not worry about that since this one was just for fun.

Thank you so much for posting your thoughts about it. If anybody has anymore post them :D
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